Kenji™ Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 [align=center] WHAT NEW: Better LinesBetter BottomBetter SparklesNow Has Japanese Text (yay) Need CnC, plzCredit: Thx to Blood Rose for the cool render[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Try swqueezing the top and bottom bars on the text down a little, it looks a bit far away. Try adding a little bit of an emboss on the words, it would make it more realistic looking, imo. You definitely need to raise the 5D's logo and title a lot. they are almost running into the copyright at the bottom.. and for the Japanese text title: the symbols are a bit too far apart. I dont understand the stroke you put on it either.. so, its far from perfect. :| i say, about a 6-7/10. ~Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenji™ Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 [align=center]Ok, thx uI fixed emHow about it now???[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•:Elonar:• Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I don't like it so much : / The render is a bit LQToo much glow on the left side for meText seems oddThe dots on the bottom and top are too visable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo Fugario Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 150 logo is LQ Text is misplaced ;)Jap text too bigGood sparkles.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 the renders alrightthe text is alrightthe sparkles alrightthe lines alrighteverything's alright just not perfectsome adjustments neededbesides all of the above good :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 [align=center]Top dots are too low down for me, also the bars don't match the text colour.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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