chaos_demon Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 This the first Chapter of the series(Very short).And I would like to know what everyone thinks before I continue. Clouds Endeavor-Chapter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I like it. The plot seems doesn't seem original. It is always avenging people in comics/anime/mangas. I would like it to be different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 And that Axel always says: "like your useless father" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaos_demon Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I like it. The plot seems doesn't seem original. It is always avenging people in comics/anime/mangas. I would like it to be different. Ill try to change it up a bit then... And that Axel always says: "like your useless father" Yeah I know srry...I kinda winged it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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