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[Archelaus]

Underpowered or Overpowered?

This card cannot be Normal Suumoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Beast-Type or Dinosaur-Type monsters from your field or Graveyard from play. The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the total ATK of the removed monsters. Once per turn, you may return this card to your hand to Special Summon the monsters used to Special Summon this card.

[.Impact]

its overpowered a bit because the total attack of bother could equal like a conductor tyranno plus a super powered beast. You should make it the total level of stars x200. here ocg fix

careless errors-Normal Suumoned =Summoned

old ocg-your side of the field=under your control=fromyour control and other verions that say control. The get rid of the last part cause that makes it ridiculously powerful then make effect

The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the total level of the removed monsters x200.

[Doom_Shaman]

i dont think either. i like it alot.

 

10/10

[Jon92]

I think your card is underpowered. I suggest changing the last effect it has.

Although, it may be ok as is because you can return it to your hand while summoning the used cards, this helps because you can remove other stronger one to make this card stronger.

9/10.

[Archelaus]

thanks for the ratings, i'll try to improve

[.Impact]

i promise u its over poweredthe card can equal over 6000 make it level cause it can be over 3000 then not 6000 thats stronger then god cards

[Archelaus]

i'll try to fix the card,

 

how about this card:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding all the cards in your hand and offering a monster with 2000 or more ATK. When this card is successfully Special Summoned this way, take control of 1 of your opponent's monsters(regardless of position). On the End Phase of the turn this card is Special Summoned, destroy this card.

 

credits:http://luciole.deviantart.com/art/Death-and-Trust-120786237

[NeriesUmbra]

my sergestion is make it so the last part of the effect can only be used during the standby phase and this card will be fine since if you keep it like that you could attack with this card then bring the other two back to attack to a bit like Defusion oh and anyone that says this is overpowerd look up Gran margu garazet. 7/10

[Archelaus]

CHIMERATOPS FIX:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Beast-Type or Dinosaur-Type monsters from your field or Graveyard from play. The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the half the total ATK of the removed monsters. Once per turn, you may return this card to your hand to Special Summon the monsters used to Special Summon this card.

[.Impact]

way to hard to summon and effect should be a little better u should be able to keep the card but lose 500 Life points ocg correction

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding all the cards in your hand. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, you can gain control of 1 of your opponent's monsters(regardless of position). At the End Phase of the turn that you activate this effect your opponent gains 750 Life Points. If this card is destroyed the card that you took control of is destroyed as well. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can add this card from from your Graveyard to your hand by paying 500 Life Points.

muy exellente

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thats good to it just sounded more creative by doin it with levels there are a ton of cards that are like that

[Archelaus]

way to hard to summon and effect should be a little better u should be able to keep the card but lose 500 Life points ocg correction

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding all the cards in your hand. When this card is successfully Special Summoned' date=' you can gain control of 1 of your opponent's monsters(regardless of position). At the End Phase of the turn that you activate this effect your opponent gains 750 Life Points. If this card is destroyed the card that you took control of is destroyed as well. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can add this card from from your Graveyard to your hand by paying 500 Life Points.

muy exellente[hr']

thats good to it just sounded more creative by doin it with levels there are a ton of cards that are like that

 

hmm, nice ocg fix, i'll try to do better, :)

[.Impact]

i kno u will thats just like u tryin to be better

[Archelaus]

Forest Seduction FIX:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering all the monsters you control. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, you can gain control of your opponent's monsters(regardless of position) equal to the number of monsters used to Special Summon this card. At the End Phase of the turn that you activate this effect your opponent gains 2000 Life Points and this card is destroyed.

[.Impact]

yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but level should be two lower

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now thats creativity

[Archelaus]

thanks

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[Archelaus]

Hmmm, i'll try tomake better cards in the future,=]

[Doom_Shaman]

he mentioned great maju garzette :D

 

very excellent. both 9/10

[ayy lmao]

Good.

[.Impact]

yea thats the one mazu garzette

[Archelaus]

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