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Your First Card: kurashi's 4th Contest; 3 stars or higher


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KK, we all remember our first card. Mine was the legendary Phoenix and I remember how I was commented for making a suprisingly good card for my first one. Anyways, I just want you to show your first card. If you haven't ever edited it to fit for the standards of the YCM enviorment then I suggest you do it now.

 

[spoiler=Rules]

1. Make sure your card fits the rules of YCM.

2. The card that you post needs to be serious. It doesn't matter what it is as long as it isn't a joke card.

3. You need to make sure you fit the rules of YCM.

4. Registration Fee is 5 Points.

5. 10 Participants total. No more no less. Sorry.

6. Like the Thread Subject says you need at least 3 stars to enter.

7. I don't know if wheather or not you card is your first or not but it seems kinda rude if ya don't. I mean what the point of this contest if ya don't bring out your first ever card. This is less of a rule and more of me asking you. Plz bring out your first ever card.

8. I want you guys and gals to try and find your card unedited. Post them here then edit them. Once you edit them post them here. This is more for those that don't want to post their first cards because of the effect being well overpowered. Also wouldn't ya like to see how far you've gotten with your ocg. I would.

 

 

[spoiler=Prizes]

1st Place: Total Amount of the Registration Fee and 3 Rep

2nd Place: 10 Points + 2 Rep

3rd Place: 7 Points + 1 Rep

All others will get 2 rep just for entering. Sorry it's not the amount you had. I need my own points to ya know.

 

 

[spoiler=participants]

1. DeMeNTeD

2. ironmanben

3. ~xXDevilsDestroyerXx~ (Not First Card)

4. A Dark Legendary Emperor

5. Stereo

6. tommers2008

7. jacoby746 (Card(s) not Submitted)

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Un-edited version:

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Edited Version:

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[spoiler=Card Lore:]

Each time this card destroys a monster with less than 2000 ATK, place 1 "Trophy" counter on this card.(Max. 5) Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200 for each "Trophy" counter placed on it. Once per turn, you can remove 5 "Trophy" counters from this card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with a higher ATK than this card. When this card is destroyed by Battle, remove from play the monster that destroyed it. If this card is destroyed by a "Xenomorph" monster, you can pay 1200 Life Points to return this card to your hand instead.

 

 

As u can see I changed the effect, hope that's OK cuz its the same character.

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I don't have the un-edited version of mine; it had the same name as this card, but this card was saved, so yeah...

 

But I'll tell ya... looking at the un-edited version, now, made me think "I made this?" It was still above average for a new member, but yes, there were some minor OCG errors, along with, maybe, 1 or 2 balancing issues.

 

It, now, goes with a set I've started recently called "The Legendary Super Saiyan". (Soon to be a full Dragon Ball set.)

 

You probably need to take a look at the set first to find out it's Summoning Condition and other parts of the effect.

 

Here's the Link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-113719.html

 

And here's the card (edited):

 

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Effect:

This card can only be Summoned by the effect of "Legendary Transformation". You can only control 1 "Broly" monster at a time. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards during the turn it was Summoned. During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If your opponent loses Life Points this way, change this card to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step.

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[align=center]~Entry Reserved~

 

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[spoiler=Card Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can not be Special Summoned except by offering 3 Beast-Type Monsters from your side of the Field.If this card attacks a Beast-Type Monster you can increase this cards ATK by 700.If this card is attacked by a Beast-Type Monster you can offer another Beast-Type Monster on your side of the field negate the attack.By offering 1000 Life Points you can destroy one of your opponents monsters,if you use this effect this card cannot attack.By offering another Beast-Type Monster you can increase this cards ATK by 500 for the turn

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Effect:

"The Dark Veangeance of The Storm" + "The Storm Dragon".

This card cannot be Summoned from any route except Fusion Summon, once this card attacks, pay 1000 Life Points, once you do, pick any Level 4 or lower monster for it for you to gain 1000 Life Points, If that chosen monster attacks, inflict 2000 Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

I found it, the unedited version I think.

Here:

 

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Effect:

"The Dark Veangeance of The Storm" + "The Storm Dragon".

This card cannot be summoned from any route except Fusion Summon, once this card attacks, this monster pays 1000 Life Points, once you do, pick any Level 4 or Lower Monster For it for you to gain 1000 Life Points, If that chosen monster attacks, inflict 2000 Battle damage to your Opponent.

 

That's my crap card, and my first card.

Load of errors isn't it?

 

EDIT: Sent the points Kurashi.

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Amazing, simply amazing. Devil plz put your first card up. Edit: I believe I saw your first card Devil. (I looked through your posts and looked for the very first card you posted.) Ya only need to make edits to it. Bring the original then edit it and post that one. Ya know something I'm gonna make a new rule.

 

Dark Emporer, I'm gonna need your points before ya can enter. Plz and thank you

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I will enter...

 

1st card

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Card Edit:

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Effect - When this card destroys a monster by battle increase your opponent's Life Points by 500. Once per turn, you can discard a card from your hand and decrease this cards ATK by 500 until your next Standby Phase, to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play and take damage equal to its original ATK to destroy all face-up cards your opponent controls.

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A bump and update to those who need this.

 

Update: With one more day left until this contest is over my judgement with the current members can greatly change but you need to find the Origional to your cards. I'm pretty sure (In all actuallity I'm almost certain) that the origionals to your cards are still in your post of the cards or at the very least someone corrected it. (I know mine is and was corrected.) Plz try hard to find these cards. I would like this to be fair but my desision is highly influenced by the most recent of my rules.

 

Also Jaco, you need to give up your card.

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