Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 I need help on how to improve this. I got a comment about making some outlines for the shapes. Made with a Trackpad not a mouse xD. 100% scratch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Meh, I don't really like it... Too smudgy... Even though it probably isn't smudge... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•:Elonar:• Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 I think it may look better if you add something to the focal in the middle. Right now, there just isn't enough stuff there. At least for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 too smudged doesn't seem that awesomecolours are fine'ish but don't make it better then it is simple for YOU!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Try outlines or pure black as color at some parts to make focal stand out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 This is digital art... so it's mostly painting. & yes it is smudging. >_>.I need to find a focal ;'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 everyone is an Idiot >.> nice smudging mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 I don't get it, what is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 everyone is an Idiot >.> nice smudging mate. ^ Someone that knows about art :D. Thanks m8. Marvel:: I don't need to tell you. If you can't get it then sorry try harder next time :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 @ everyone except altair- It is from scratch.... Has nice smudging. Making something from scratch is difficult. Therefore, this is great, because it is a nice outcome, and it is from scratch. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Good smudging I think it might look better if the landscape shapes were more defined around the more intense colors. Might make it a little more realistic since our eyes are able to see better detail between such contrasting colors.Just a thought, don't know for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Thanks Shadow. Much <3 prob. Will try in a few minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Altair is right >.> This is jabroniin. It's the truth. Amazing. If I might say, the only thing that it needs is just a little somethin to make the focal stand out a little more. Still, Beautifully jabroniin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Thanks m8. Still under-construction with it lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Is this from scratch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 yeah Mr.obvious :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 everyone is an Idiot >.> nice smudging mate. ^ Someone that knows about art :D. Thanks m8. I do know >.< I just meant (like you said) that you need to find the focal =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 The only thing that annoys me is the brown spot in the top left that sticks out. >.> The white on V1 is a bit annoying. Other than that, it's f***ing awesome. I myself would work a bit more on the bottom left, where the brown is (guessing it's a representation of land. Dunno for sure. xD). Pretty awesome, bud. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Yo' Penguin is not sexy ;D Still under-construction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 smudge ftw :DIt looks like Dracula xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YCMagician Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Have you smudged these? if so too much also the top one with the white thing doesnt look too good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 mm'kay. I know it doesn't look to good. & it's all smudge not stocks used -.- it's a smudge work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 lol ok theres no focal though that a decent background though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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