Max Darkness Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Affenboy, here is my version of your "Alexandro The Merciless". For those of you who don't know, this card was originally created by Affenboy but with a large amount of OCG and grammar errors. I offered to remake it to try and correct the mistakes. Effect: When this card is summoned, pay 1000 Life Points. The number of monsters your opponent controls determines this card's effect:1: This card loses 500 ATK and DEF.2: Your opponent cannot activate monster effects.3: Your opponent cannot activate Spell Cards.4: This card gains 500 ATK and DEF.5: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Changes: I have changed the title to "Alexandro The Merciless". I thought "Far Eastern Warrior of Light: Alexandro The Merciless" looked too squashed at the top, so I shortened it. I've changed its level from 7 to 8. This is because its ATK and DEF were very high for a Level 7, and its wildcard effect also swayed me to make it a Level 8. Instead of paying 1000 Life Points to activate the card's effect, I thought it better to pay 1000 Life Points to summon it (that stops any arguments regarding you paying 1000 Points every time you use its effect). I have also changed the effects and their order. I did this as I thought it would be good if the card's effect got stronger as the number of monsters your opponent controlled increased. So...an improvement or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Some OCG errors, but okay job. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Arceus, I realise that I would have to have put "...as long as this card remains face-up on the field..." for each of the effects; but if I had, the text would have become font size 5 or something ridiculous. Thanks though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Minor OCG, nice card idea (even though its not really your idea lol) Just to be sure, U did ask the original creater if u could remake it right? Its against the rules if u didnt... Shouldnt it say: "If you control 1 monster...." "If you control 2 monsters..."and so on.Right? or did u just want it the way it is to save space? Just sayin...8/10 :) I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 ThisGuy777 I did ask, and I like I said to Arceus, if I put it completely correctly, the text would become so small you couldn't read it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Right? or did u just want it the way it is to save space? Just sayin...8/10 :) I like it So it was to save space. I just wanted to know :) still 8/10 TY for answering my Q Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_flame_dragon Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 9/10, you did a pretty good job, but 2600 is mostly average for a level 7 monster, but i guess it doesn't matter whether or not it's 8 or 7. And you did a nice job explaining why you did what you did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Could use some better wording but its OK, also could do with a more creative effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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