Haseo Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 This was an order by ~ Chidori. This sig is the first one i have amde that has some smudging and C4ds. Please CnC! [spoiler=Color Version] [spoiler=Black and White] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 I think it's really interesting. Love what you did on the left side with the bars. You really captured the torment of Lelouche in this Sig. Impressive. Definitly one of the better ones I've seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Lacks a lot blending and depth.Too much wind on the left side for me.Black & White is better.The left side distracts way too much attention away from the focal.Could do with some sharpen, dodge & burn, along with a Black & White Grad. Map on Luminosity. I'm tired, so I'll leave it at that. Nice job compared to your others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 And This Is Your First In That Style?Nice Work ;)I'm No Expert But It Looks Good :DKeep Working At It And If This Is Only The First Try, I Guarantee Your Pro Ones Will Be Awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Gonna just critique on the color one Render should be more centralized, when they're off to the side it's more like they're getting in the way of our view of the backgroundRender isn't too good of qualityHim looking towards the bottom left explains the flow on the right side, but it doesn't explain the horizontal lines from the left and the ones coming from the top left and moving to the bottom rightBackground is just bad, should try to make some sort of world or area rather than an open universe with some gigantic transparent flowerThe grayer shape in the background is rather unappealingThe dark strands of shadow coming from his face don't go with the rest of the tagThe dots are too few and don't add anything, their outer glow of a dark color is also nonsenseI can't tell if there is lighting, it looks like there is shading on the bottom left but the angle would be wrong and it seems wierd that it would only affect such a certain areaNo depth, it's pretty flatNo blending, a lot of the things don't really look like they belong together There are probably some things I'm missing, but I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 everything seems to try to steal the focaltheres no blendingthe flow doesn't match or help the renderlooks like you just pasted a bunch of random effects. Stop doing that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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