Luna Diviner Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Welcome all, to The Tale of Thirteen. A fan-fiction based on the Kingdom Hearts universe with a twist, the characters are based on members of this forum. If anyone complains about this being a rip off Zexy's fic, can they gladly GTFO! The idea doesn't belong to him and he already knows about this anyway.[align=center][spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Vexeaus]Name: VexeausAge: 2 (Time of Naming)PoE: ????[spoiler=Appearance] [spoiler=Weapon] Vexeaus uses a Keyblade much like the Kingdom Key except it has a pallete swap and it was created in the Realm of Nothingness. This Keyblade doesn't have any special abilities. Biography: Vexeaus is a Nobody of Axeveus; a soldier who fought in King Mickey's army, after losing his best friend to in the war his heart succumbed to darkness and Vexeaus was born. Vexeaus has control over speed and is also a Keyblade Bearer but their may be more to him than meets the eye.[/align] [align=center][spoiler=Prologue]It had been a shaky 3 years for the Nobodies to rebuild Castle Oblivion. There was also the task of deciding who would be the new members of Organization XIII. 4 members had already been chosen but 9 spaces were still open. Xeaon or the “Mirror of Equity” was chosen as the leader as well as Clariex, Nevex and Xuldarc. Vexeaus awoke to find the time was already ’09:35’, he was already going to be 25 minutes late for the Selection Ceremony, he quickly got dressed in his black, leather jacket. He combed his jet black fringed over his right eye, did he look a mess? He didn’t have time to debate that as he had to arrive to Castle Oblivion in less than 10 minutes. Luckily for him, he had an ability which would allow him to get to the castle quickly. The ability to alter an object’s speed up to 400 times. It seemed simple: Just run to the castle. However, with such a high speed, if by any chance he crashed into an object, he would surely die. It hadn’t even been a minute since Vexeaus had left his home and he had already reached Castle Oblivion, he had been running at 4 times his usually speed but even that wore him out. Vexeaus arrived to a Where Nothing Gathers, he was the last to arrive and the 9 others Nobodies were staring at him. “Oh Vexeaus, with an ability like yours I am baffled to how you could turn up late.” Said Xeaon sternly. Clariex cackled, “Maybe we shouldn’t accept him in the Organization, he has no discipline.” “Let’s give him a chance, new blood will be exciting.” Said Xuldarc, licking his lips. “He may be of assistance. Vexeaus, what do you have to say?” asked Nevex. “I truly am sorry for any trouble that I have caused, forgive me.” Said Vexeaus. The eyes of the Organization members were fixated upon Vexeaus. “Well done Vexeaus, you have been accepted.” Said Xeaon. Clariex scoffed, “Prove me wrong kid, prove me wrong. “And you will need this.” Said Xeaon and he touched Vexeaus on the shoulder, engulfing him with dark energy allowing him to use the Corridors of Darkness to travel around the worlds. Vexeaus smiled, “Thank you” The 5 Nobodies opened Corridors of Darkness and teleported to a floating platform above Castle Oblivion, waiting for them was another other Organization member. He had probably been accepted just before him, thought Vexeaus. A skeletal, silver haired Nobody who previously had his back to Vexeaus, turned his head round and whispered, “I am, Miax” “I am Vexeaus.” Said Vexeaus. “Now that you two have met we need to get around to the important things.” Said Xeaon. Once again they opened a Corridor of Darkness and travelled to a plain white room, there was also no floor in the room and the Nobodies were suspended in the air. “Welcome to Twilight Tower, from outside this looks exactly like its name describes but to a Nobody it is completely different. This is the most important room in the Castle, if anything were to happen in this room. It would destroy the Castle from the inside out.” “That sounds nice.” Joked Clariex. “Jokes aside, we need to discuss something serious.” Said Nevex. “Thank you Nevex. As you know the evil fiend, Sora and his band of trouble makers have killed our predecessors. After recruiting new members we will proceed to phase 2. Eliminating Sora!” bellowed Xeaon as if he was making the most important statement of his life. “I wonder how Sora tastes?” Said Xuldarc licking his lips, once again. “Me too” Said Clariex amusingly. “So how should we defeat this Sora?” asked Miax. “Obviously, we will need a strategy.” Said Nevex. “Has anyone thought of a strategy so far?” enquired Vexeaus. “Well we could always use you as bait and I could stab him in the back.” Said Clariex. “For some reason, that doesn’t seem to appeal to me.” Joked Vexeaus.[/align][align=center][spoiler=Chapter 1]The 6 Organization members sat around a long, rectangular eating their breakfast. Vexeaus looked around himself, was he supposed to do anything at this moment? He suspected that joining the Organization was to be exciting but so far he hadn’t done anything remotely exciting. “Vexeaus for us to even attempt killing Sora, we must be prepared.” Said Xeaon. “How shall we get prepared?” asked Vexeaus. “Easy.” Replied Nevex. “Lessons.” “Lessons?” said Vexeaus. “Yes, Clariex and I will train you.” Said Nevex. “Training?” Wondered Vexeaus. Clariex grabbed hold of Vexeaus’ arm and teleported him to a white coloured room, filled with large white pillars. Clariex pulled out three knives from her pocket. “Wanna play with these?” asked Clariex. “Not really.” Replied Vexeaus. “Well, you have too.” Said Clariex as she through the knives towards Vexeaus. Vexeaus had to think fast, he placed both his hands forward in front of him and began charging energy for a Stopra to freeze the knives. Users of Stop Magic have the ability of partially stopping time but it leaves strong opponents free to think or speak. Clariex smiled and at that moment the knives were no longer suspended in time and were homing to Vexeaus. “What? How did you do that?” puzzled Vexeaus. “I am unique as I utilize my mind during my attacks; all I had to do was telekinetically push the knives towards you.” Vexeaus increased his speed and began jumping from pillar to pillar evading the knives but Clariex didn’t falter. Clariex used her psychic ability to make herself levitate and moved her self towards Vexeaus. Vexeaus’ attempt was in vain as the Stopra Magic came to an end and Clariex was free to move physically. Clariex charged towards Vexeaus whilst she controlled her knives to levitate around her. It was somewhat unfair that Clariex had a weapon but he had nothing. “Do you want to do die?” Taunted Clariex. Angrily Vexeaus rushed towards her, readying a swift blow but quickly she controlled her knives to block the attack. Piercing Vexeaus’ hands. Clariex used her ability to lunge the knives towards Vexeaus. Their was no use using a Stopra move as Clariex could still control the knives, he was fast running out of ideas. A sphere of light appeared, Vexeaus lifted his arm up to try and reach the sphere. As Vexeaus touched the orb a strange weapon appeared, some sort of sword but instead of having a point it somewhat resembled the teeth of a key. At that moment everything froze but himself. A blonde haired girl, draped in white protruded from the sphere. “Vexeaus, you have been chosen to wield the Keyblade from the World of Nothingness.” Said the girl. “A what?” questioned Vexeaus. “A Keyblade, you are very lucky as their are only 4 true Keyblade wielders in the world.” Said the girl as she vanished. Vexeaus looked at the weapon, the blade and teeth were black, the rain guard; red and the hilt; gold. Their was a key chain tied to the bottom of the hilt which resembled the Nobody symbol. Soon after, the time was no longer frozen. Clariex looked at the Keyblade and laughed. “Oh wow, you have a new toy.” Clariex began using her telekinesis to levitate the pillars including the one Vexeaus had been standing on. As Vexeaus was falling to the ground, Clariex pelted him with a barrage of falling pillars. Vexeaus began swinging the Keyblade, destroying any pieces of debris that was going to fall on him. He then amplified his speed and began jumping from pillar to pillar until he reached Clariex. As many times as Vexeaus tried to hit Clariex, she controlled a pillar to block the attack. Vexeaus pointed the Keyblade to Clariex and shot out a Fire spell towards Clariex and then he quickly combined that with a Stopra. Despite the fact Clariex could still use her psychic ability the timing caught her off, allowing the spell to land. Clariex was irritated, Vexeaus’ attacks had reached for the first time. The game just got interesting. Clariex ran towards Vexeaus and began rapidly kicking him in the chest which caused him to fall of the pillar he had been standing on. Vexeaus smashed the teeth of the blade in to the pillar, slowing down his descent. Vexeaus bent his legs and pushed of from the pillar and used a Fire Spell to destroy the pillar, causing Clariex to plummet. Clariex quickly brought her knives to her and she grabbed hold of them. As the two fell, swords and knives clashed in rapid succession. Clariex was quickly running out of energy as she had been using her telekinesis for great feats. Clariex had only one ounce of energy left inside her, would she use it to save Vexeaus and herself and suffer humiliation or finish him off? Clariex pulled herself and Vexeaus back up on to a pillar. “Thank you Clariex.” Said Vexeaus. “Oh, we’re not finished yet.” Laughed Clariex and she kicked Vexeaus of the pillar. After Vexeaus had regained consciousness he looked to find that all the other Organization members were looking down at him. “You did well kid, you did well.” Said softly which was quite unusual for her. “Tha..than..thanks.” said Vexeaus and slowly his eyes closed.Nevex slapped Vexeaus on the cheek, “Wake up, you have more training mister.” Nevex took Vexeaus to another room, this time their was a floating platform covered in rocky terrain. Vexeaus looked down, their was a very long drop. Nevex pointed at a rock and soon after it was crushed in to pieces. Vexeaus’ jaw dropped, both of his teachers had some pretty amazing abilities. Compared to them, controlling speed was nothing unless he wanted to commit suicide which he didn’t want to do any time soon. Nevex clicked his fingers and 20 black targets appeared, “Your mission to destroy all the targets but only by using magic. You will rated on your skill, using a combination spell will result in a higher mark.” Vexeaus laughed, “Is that all?” “Oh no, it will be harder. Trust me, it will be harder!”[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 I quite like the story so far. Maybe they'll manage to kill him. =o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Thanks, did I capture everyones personalities? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Does Clariex cackle? Doesn't seem to fit her, honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diableos Auros Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Sweet. I haven't really been a major KH fan, but this fan fic is epic. =3 ~D. Auros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Well I just wanted her to be the joker type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 A one word reply? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 You have already read my reply in the club. I await more of your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 I know but others may think that this is spam, new chap probably out on Monday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 That is very calming to hear. I await the update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Pretty impressive, I know the perfect way for us to use Vexaeus in our evil plan, we turn the castle which never was into Fortress Maximus from transformers and put Vexaeus in a giant gerbil wheel and transfer the kinetic energy into electrical energy for the Transformers. Or we use said Fortress Maximus as a minicon factory and use tranforming robots to smash Sora's gummi ship.Or (Dare I say it) we destroy all save pads in existence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Lol, that may happen... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 ...OMGBehold the very first transformers/KH crossover. Transformers, robots in disguiseSorabots raise thier batttle to destroy the evil forces of the Orgicons (decipticons) I call Soundwave's role! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Should I add a character list, or let their personalities unfold over the series? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Both, just use the character list to show powers and what they do. Later, after some character development, you add their personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Unfortunately, the new chapter will be released on Wednesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I can't wait that long. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I do not even have Microsoft word so I must use a remote access server to use things like Word but the sessions are incredibly small and as their is no school tommorow, I must wait for a proper write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 You poor thing, I couldn't live without my MS Word. I'll just be patient then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Me neither but I got used to it. I will make tekteks for everyone, so watch out for the exciting update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 tekteks? What are those? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Those crappy little things people use on gaia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Oh........yay. Keep on writing, this is gold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Don't you have a Notepad on your computer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.