Furious Reaper I Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 This is a completely original fic, well mostly original [spoiler=Characters] Name: Martin KayAge: 17Bio: Abdoned at 11, Martin was found on the street by Lionel Swann who taught him how to defend himself and how to intimidate others and to attack relentlesslyAppearance: Has brown hair and blue eyes. Wears a dark blue set of jeans, a dark green shirt and a black leather trench coat Name: Fredrik LindellAge: 17Bio: One of Martin's closest friends, Fredrik helped his friend after he was abdoned by his parents. During the years Lionel Swann also helped Fredrik with his weapon combat and hand to hand combatAppearance: Has dark brown hair and red eyes. Wears a black set of jeans, a red shirt and a black jacket Name: Lionel SwannAge: 40Bio: A talented buisnessman but also one of the toughest men in the world, he has been known to smash a concrete block to little pieces with just his head. over the past six year he has taught Martin Kay and Fredrik Lindell how to use hand to hand combat weapons like baseball bats perfectly and but also has perfected they accuracy with guns especially the sniper rifle and 9mm. he also taught them several sadistic and cruel to beat up and kill thier targetsAppearance: He wears an Armani suit with a full body armor suit on underneath [spoiler= Prolouge]Martin was walking down the street minding his own business when an alarm at a nearby store went off, The perpertrator ran towards Martin and he punched him square in the face and then proceeded to kick him in between the legs twice before allowing the police to apprehend him. One of the police officer recognised Martin and turned to his partner “Isn’t that Martin Kay?” His partner, who was under the payroll of Lionel Swann looked at him as if he was crazy “I’m sure you have him mixed up with someone else. Kay’s been dead for years. I was at the shootout he died in” he said loud enough for Martin to hear Martin quickly turned around and started to walk off when he was obstructed by the police officer that asked the question “Martin Kay you are under arrest” Martin looked at him and quicker than most kneed the officer in between the legs and pulled out his 9mm firing it twice into the cop’s head His partner walked up to Martin and looked him directly in the eyes “Did you have to kill him?” he asked, even though he knew the answer “Yes, he pissed me off and you know what happens to people who do that” Martin replied “You better get out of here whilst I sort this mess out” Martin took the hint and walked off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 WTF? I am in the fic?! That's awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 [spoiler=Untitled Chapter 1: Accurate Eye and Down in Flames] Martin was about a mile away from where he shot a police officer when a Turismo speeds past him and turns into his path, stopping a few centimetres short of running him over. The door opens and Fredrik climbs out “I see your still as violent as ever Martin” “Yeah, but I done worst than that” “I know. I was there remember” stated Fredrik, shuddering as he remembered the extreme brutality of his best friend “Did Lionel send you?” asked Martin “Yes and No. I was already on my way to pick you up when Lionel called me and told me what you did” said Fredrik, wondering how Martin would react Martin punches the windscreen of the car, cracking it in three places. “Why did you do that?” demanded Fredrik, pissed t “Because I wanted to and you know there isn’t a damn thing you can do about it” answered Martin, pulling his 9mm and aiming it at Fredrik “Woah calm down” said Fredrik, pushing Martin’s 9mm down A black limo pulls up next to both of them and the back door opens and Lionel Swann steps out and looks at both of them before punching Martin and throwing him to the floor, Fredrik jumps in front of him as he goes to kick Martin “What are you doing Mr.Swann?” asked Fredrik, fearful for his friend “Teaching him a lesson he needs to learn” “What lesson would that be?” “Self control when it comes to the police” Lionel pushes Fredrik into a wall and kicks Martin in the stomach twice before punching him the face. Martin slowly rises to his feet and when Lionel goes to hit him again Martin blocks the punch and kicks Lionel between the legs. He then leans into the limo and pulls out a baseball bat and hits Lionel with it twice in the ribs. Fredrik gets up and pulls the bat out of Martin’s hand and snaps it, he looks at Lionel and then Martin before smiling and helping them both back to their feet. “Looks like he beat you Mr.Swann” commented Fredrik “Well that’s true but Fredrik you know I need you both to show self control when it comes to the police. Martin I know how hot headed you can be and sometimes it works like just now but other times it gets very annoying. We need to get to the safe house” ------- A few hours later ------Fredrik, Martin and Lionel are overlooking a store with gang members stationed in front it. Martin turns to Lionel “How long have these baldies been guarding the place?” he asked, raising an eyebrow “It’s part of their protection racket. If the Swann Crime Family are going to keep their vice grip on the city we need to eliminate these ‘baldies’ as you put it. Fredrik take both gangsters out with your sniper” Fredrik fires his sniper twice, the first bullet hitting its target right in the mouth and the second bullet hitting its target in the right eye. Four more gangsters rush out and Fredrik hits each and everyone of them in between the eyes with his sniper Martin gulps and turns to Fredrik “How and when the hell did you get so good with that sniper” “I learned how to be accurate with this sniper over the past six years with the help of Mr.Swann” “I have told you countless times before. You do not need to call me Mr.Swann. My name is Lionel” said Lionel “What you do want me to do Lionel?” asked Martin, smiling “You are to go into the store and convince the owner to pay protection to me and if he refuses burn the store with him inside” Martin leaves the vantage point and heads across the street into the store ---- Inside the store ---- The owner walks down the stair and looks at Martin before trying to escape by running past him but Martin just knees him in the groin and watches him fall to the floor before stamping on his groin twice more “You are going to start paying protection to Lionel Swann for the safety of your business and more importantly the safety of your manhood” To emphasise his point he kicks the owner once more in the groin “I c-c-can’t. the leader of the S-S-Skinheads will kill me” stammered the owner “Wrong answer “ stated Martin, smiling sadistically He pulls out a baseball bat and hits the owner with it twice in the groin, he then pulls out a canister of liquid and starts pouring it around the store and all over the owner before hitting in the face with the bat, knocking him out. He leaves the store and throws a lit match in through the open door A black limo pulls up alongside with Lionel and Fredrik already inside. Martin climbs inside the limo and looks through the back window as the store is consumed by fire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 That was EPIC man! I gotz a sniper! But if this is to be accurate to our personalities, then here's a few facts about me, personality termed: I can be quite sadistic I usually make up bad jokes(that's true, and it's a bad habit I have) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I like O.o Nevah seen a GTA fic before, so you better finish this one >=D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 This is epic, cruel and bloody, sweet!!!! How'd you know I like GTA, if you don't, I just want you to know. GTA Rocks!!!!! Anyways, have you been reading my Yugioh fic, it's called Fighting Edge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 [spoiler=Untitled Chapter 2: Revenge Gone Wrong and Alliances Forged] Lionel stood outside the burned out store with a sick smile on his face when a car stopped right behind Lionel and someone got out of the car “This is for getting your lackey to burn down the store” Lionel turns around and knees the man in the stomach and when he drops to the floor he then knees him in the face, Lionel then goes to his car and opens the back door before pulling the unconscious man in ----A few hours later ---- The man wakes up groggily and tries to move but finds he is tied up on a steel walkway high above a canister of hydrolic acid. Lionel walks up to him and punches him “Who leads the Skinheads? Who are you?” asked Lionel, wiping his hand on a tissue from his pocket “I am John Jack Vertigo II and I aint gonna tell you who leads the Skinheads because he‘d kill me” replied John “What makes you think I won’t tip this chair over the side into the canister of hydrolic acid?” asked Lionel, grabbing the back of the chair to emphasise his point “All right but I only know his codename. He hasn‘t told us his real name. he‘s called Lionheart” stated John, fearful of what Lionel would do “Thank you for that. Now it’s time for you to die” said Lionel, signalling to Martin to push John into the acid. Martin walks up to John and picks the chair up above his head and throws him over the edge of the pathway and into the canister as Fredrik watches from the side with a sadistic smile on his face. Screams are heard for miles around until John is completely consumed by the acid “I think that was a little too much” commented Lionel “No, it was just perfect” said Martin and Fredrik in unison ---- A few hours later at an undisclosed location ---- “Are you ready to take down Lionel Swann?” asked Lionheart, looking at his bodyguard “Yes, master Lionheart. I will eliminate him” replied the bodyguard “Do not take the man lightly though. He has those two helpers whose sadistic nature sometimes takes over. Be careful Alex” stated Lionheart The bodyguard was stunned. His master had never called him by first name in the 12 years that he had protected him. Drake walked through the doors and knelt at the feet of Lionheart before speaking “Lionel Swann is on the phone” said Drake, handing the phone to Lionheart “It’s been a long time hasn’t it Lionel?” “Yes it has, Daniel. 12 years if I’m correct” “Why did have that damn sadistic adopted son of yours burn down my store?” asked Daniel, nearly breaking the phone in his hand “First of all it was not your store and second of all he only burned down the store because the owner refused the pay protection to me” answered Lionel, hoping that Daniel would take the bait “I suppose that’s a fine reason. Now down to business. What was your original intention when you called me?” “I suggest we form an alliance” “What do the Skinheads get for entering into this alliance?” demanded Daniel “45% of any Swann Mafia profits and territories” “What would you get out of it?” “55% of any Swann Mafia profits and territories. 15 % of Skinhead profits and a continued vice grip on the city” “Those seem like acceptable terms. Where this meeting take place?” “My office at Swann Incorporated” “Fine as long as my personal bodyguard oversees the meeting with me and you tell me what happened to John Jack Veritas II” said Daniel, smiling “Right then I had him killed. Get here for 7 am Sharp tomorrow” END OF CHAPTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Exetreme, (smashes wall) Super Extreme!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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