gorillas walk true the land of handersfiend

[RAEGING D0GKING]

this is a card that my mom asked me to do i couldin't think of what type should it be so i used a fake one

This card cannot Normal Summoned or set except by Tributing 3 Human Type monsters on your side of the field.This card is unefected to Monster effect.When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card you can pay 500 Life Points to naggate it and destroy it.If your opponent summons a card from their graveyard this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF.If this is the only card on your side of the field draw 1 card.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

bump

[PANDORUM™]

im not really sure what to say cus i dont know what section it goes in.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

this ofcourse and it doesen't mater just please tell me what to fix

[Black_flame_dragon]

Well, you do have a lot of mispellings.

 

Grammer error: unefected to

Grammer solution: Unaffected by

 

Grammer error: naggate it and destroy it

Grammer solution: Negate and destroy it

 

You also forgot to put a space before starting a new sentence. e.g.

 

Error: You forgot to put spaces in sentences.This is the mistake.

Solution: You forgot to put spaces in sentences. This is the solution.

 

It's pretty good without grammer errors though, so i'll say 8.5/10

[RAEGING D0GKING]

thanks