SONIC!!!! AWSOME EFFECT and AWSOME PIC [by: me of course] PLEASE VIEW!

[gamekrazzy]

VIOLA, THE AWSOME....

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!

 

 

Please... Save your applause for after the credits. Wait! Where are the credits?

Stupid me, wrong thread, there are no credits.

So save your applause until.... Ok go ahead and applaud. XD!

[edy121(etc)]

pic is fine, but OCG is way off. keep training with that grammar ;)

[The Tin Trooper]

OK Card. Pic good, OCG off, keep it up and you'll be a pro in no time!

[Super Half Vamp Riku]

good card ocg errors.10/10 for effort.

[Yankee]

Meh, it's an "O.K" card, the pic is ok, the grammar needs alot of help, and the effect has a big chance to be overpowered, but it's ok I guess.

Overall, it's kinda meh, but not too bad.

[gamekrazzy]

Everyone tells me "OCG is off, but does anyone want to correct me? Anyone here know how to word this so that it has the same effect with Correct OCG?

If you can't correct me, then don't say that grammer is wrong, because I need to know how to fix grammer, not that it's wrong, by apparent wouldn't you think I know that already.

Thanks for the comment on the pic and the idea though! :)

[Symbiote]

Everyone tells me "OCG is off' date=' but does anyone want to correct me? Anyone here know how to word this so that it has the same effect with Correct OCG?

If you can't correct me, then don't say that grammer is wrong, because I need to know how to fix grammer, not that it's wrong, by apparent wouldn't you think I know that already.

Thanks for the comment on the pic and the idea though! :)

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Here you go. Don't capitalize destroyed, "this card can attack an extra time" should be "this card can attack an extra time during the same Battle Phase for each face-up EARTH Beast-Type monster on the field."

[gamekrazzy]

So basically just destroyed. The reason I don't have the sentence starting with "This card..." Well read all the other sentences... I mean talk about annoying. This card... This card... This card... Who wants to read that.

[Symbiote]

So basically just destroyed. The reason I don't have the sentence starting with "This card..." Well read all the other sentences... I mean talk about annoying. This card... This card... This card... Who wants to read that.

 

Well alot of the time, that's how the OCG is correct.

[gamekrazzy]

Ok, no arguement. But I am pretty sure that if everyone is saying that OCG is WAY off then it has to be more then what you have pointed out. What I think the problem is, is what I just pointed out to you the "This monster... This monster... This monster...".

[Symbiote]

The OCG isn't WAY off. Just a bit... it's pretty good. Also don't capitalize activating. And instead of saying "this monster" at the beginning of the first 2 sentences, say "This card".

[gamekrazzy]

XD! that is what i normally have it as, I must have been half asleep when I made the card. Anyways I still think that it has to deal with the this card thing, so I think I will wait for more replies by someone else and see what they have to say.

[Symbiote]

XD! that is what i normally have it as' date=' I must have been half asleep when I made the card. Anyways I still think that it has to deal with the this card thing, so I think I will wait for more replies by [b']someone else[/b] and see what they have to say.

 

Yeah you should. I'm not always right about OCG...