Gunner's

[LiAM]

Just a thought...

They use gunner counters

 

Speed Gunner

4* / Warrior/ DARK

ATK: 1600||DEF: 400

Lore: Once per turn, by removing 1 Gunner Counter from this card, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase until the End Phase, this card cannot declare an attack during your next Battle Phase after activation.

 

Force Gunner

4*/ Warrior/ LIGHT

ATK: 1200||DEF: 1600

Lore: Once per turn, you can double this cards original ATK, if you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly until the End Phase.

 

Time Gunner

5*/ Warrior/ WIND

ATK: 2000|| DEF: 1000

Lore: This card cannot attack during your Battle Phase. This card can only attack during your Main Phase. If this card declares an attack during your Main Phase 1, put 1 Gunner Counter on this card. (max. 2). By removing 2 Gunner Counters from this card, this card can attack during your opponents Main Phase 2.

[Shocked]

Great card

but, I'm not sure about the "Force Gunner"

 

Once per turn' date=' you can double this cards original ATK, if you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly. [/quote']

 

Once per turn? If that ATK is 1200, in 5 turn that card will have 6000 ATK right?

[LiAM]

Great card

but' date=' I'm not sure about the "Force Gunner"

 

Once per turn, you can double this cards original ATK, if you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

Once per turn? If that ATK is 1200, in 5 turn that card will have 6000 ATK right?

 

I may have forgot the 'until the End Phase' part.

[LiAM]

BUMP

[PremierAameer]

OCG errors but I love the idea! Especially Time Gunner. Very creative! Also the name "Gunner" is a liiitle bland. I would be glad to help you work on these cards and add to the set.

[LiAM]

OCG errors but I love the idea! Especially Time Gunner. Very creative! Also the name "Gunner" is a liiitle bland. I would be glad to help you work on these cards and add to the set.

 

Ah, OCG errors! Where?

 

And nah i wont continue this set, I already have a set going, you can adopt it.

[PremierAameer]

It's mostly punctuation that's hurting the OCG

I would deff. adopt it if I didn't have so many sets of my own to work on..

[LiAM]

:L same, I have lot of stuff to work, would you mind pointing out the punctuation errors.

[PremierAameer]

OK will do later when I get a chance.

If you can, can you check out some of my cards or sets. I can't send the link now since I'm on my phone.

[LiAM]

Urm, I'm not a fan of Written cards, I'm a semi-retard, so I need visual help.

[PremierAameer]

Yea A LOT of people feel that way lol

[LiAM]

I guess there are alot of semi-retards then.

[Lolimar]

Speed Gunner:

#1 - How does it get gunner counters? I assume from more cards which you are going to make.

#2 - "this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase until the End Phase," something just seems wrong with that OCG... Maybe something like "this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase for this turn". Maybe...

#3 - Seems very balanced.

 

Force Gunner:

#1

Great card

but' date=' I'm not sure about the "Force Gunner"

 

Once per turn, you can double this cards original ATK, if you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

Once per turn? If that ATK is 1200, in 5 turn that card will have 6000 ATK right?

 

I may have forgot the 'until the End Phase' part.

 

#2 - Otherwise, it seems balanced.

 

Time Gunner:

#1 - "This card cannot attack during your Battle Phase. This card can only attack during your Main Phase. If this card declares an attack during your Main Phase 1, put 1 Gunner Counter on this card. (max. 2). By removing 2 Gunner Counters from this card, this card can attack during your opponents Main Phase 2."

Must put attack restrictions I beleive. I'm pretty sure with this effect you can attack infinite times because it's out of Battle Phase. Not 100% sure about that though...

#2 - Otherwise, very balanced.

 

Great cards! 8/10

[PremierAameer]

and MANY more total-retards!

[ikhlas faturochman]

Good enough.

[LiAM]

Good enough.

 

A more thorough rate would be appreciated, also remove your pokeball's, they look messy.

[Lolimar]

Speed Gunner:

#1 - How does it get gunner counters? I assume from more cards which you are going to make.

#2 - "this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase until the End Phase' date='" something just seems wrong with that OCG... Maybe something like "this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase for this turn". Maybe...

#3 - Seems very balanced.

 

Force Gunner:

#1

Great card

but' date=' I'm not sure about the "Force Gunner"

 

Once per turn, you can double this cards original ATK, if you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

Once per turn? If that ATK is 1200, in 5 turn that card will have 6000 ATK right?

 

I may have forgot the 'until the End Phase' part.

 

#2 - Otherwise, it seems balanced.

 

Time Gunner:

#1 - "This card cannot attack during your Battle Phase. This card can only attack during your Main Phase. If this card declares an attack during your Main Phase 1, put 1 Gunner Counter on this card. (max. 2). By removing 2 Gunner Counters from this card, this card can attack during your opponents Main Phase 2."

Must put attack restrictions I beleive. I'm pretty sure with this effect you can attack infinite times because it's out of Battle Phase. Not 100% sure about that though...

#2 - Otherwise, very balanced.

 

Great cards! 8/10

 

This detailed enough for ya? lol.

[LiAM]

Yeah, I know you got that, just some other feedback :?

[Shocked]

[align=center]OxygënHydrõ™ Rating

 

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Comments :

 

Good ideas for the effect

little OP

But great

 

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OCG fix

 

Once per turn, by removing 1 "Gunner Counter" from this card, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase until the End Phase, this card cannot declare an attack during your next Battle Phase after activation.

 

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Pic : none

Balance : 10/10

OCG : 9/10

 

Overall : 9.5/10

 

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My Rating

 

10/10 : EPIC !!!

9/10 : Almost Perfect, little more

8/10 : Great Work

7/10 : Good Enough

6/10 : Balancing Needed

5/10 : Need Remakes, Fixing, and Balancing

4/10 : Unacceptable

3/10 : Is this a card ??

2/10 : You burn my eyes !!

1/10 : Don't make this card again !!!

0/10 : I can't say anything, except EPIC FAIL !

[LiAM]

Gunner Counter doesn't have the "things" cos its not a card name, counters remain as aa singular word.

 

But thanks for the rate :D

 

anything i can do for 10/10?

[Lolimar]

Gunner Counter doesn't have the "things" cos its not a card name' date=' counters remain as aa singular word.

 

But thanks for the rate :D

 

anything i can do for 10/10?

[/quote']

 

Make them into realistic cards section and fix OCG!

[LiAM]

I can't fix OCG as I don't know what's wrong with it.

 

But I will get onto making some pics (IE, getting some gunner pics and editing them).

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