Will.I.Am99 Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Machine HunterDestroy 2 `Machine` type cards on your opponents side of the field. This effect is only active once and can be negated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 your making too many threads i think make just 1 thread to put your cards on if your posting this many at a time now onto the card. the pic is really cool mayby it should be warrior type because its a machine hunter and its a machine type :sATK and DEF seem reasonablethe effect is a bit simple its basically a good idea make more with OCG fix. a rating of 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 kieran is right. Try concentrating your cards in a single thread. Otherwise, I'm basically agreeing with him on your card - although I believe it's a machine that's hunting, that'd assume "Machine(-type) Hunter". Also, don't include "Effect can be negated", it's plain silly since any effect can be negated unless stated otherwise. Rated B (7/10). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 nice card. you don't need to say that it can be negated and that you can only activate the effect once. this is how i would word it:"When this card is Normal or Specail Summoned, destroy up to 2 Machine-Type monsters on your opponent's side of the field." my OCG is'nt the best but thats what i came up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodomoco Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 its over powered and terrible ocg. overall 3/10 work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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