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This card gains 400 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. If you Normal Summoned a Level 3 monster this turn, this card gains the effect: If this card attacks a monster in face-up ATK Position, Inflict the targeted monster's DEF as battle damage to your opponent. For each turn a continuous Trap card is under your control, this card gains the effect: All battle damage inflicted to your Life Points is negated and inflicted on this card's ATK.

 

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This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. You may only Special Summon this card by removing from your hand to your graveyard a Aqua-Type monster(s). This card gains 500 ATK for each monster removed to Special Summon this card. When this card is destroyed, you may Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster from your graveyard.

 

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[spoiler=effect]This Card may not be Normal Summoned or Set, This card may not be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 face up water attribute monsters from your side of the field. If a monster on your side of the field is destroyed bay battle and would be send to the grave yard remove it from play instead.

 

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[spoiler=effect]The turn this card is Summoned it gains ATK equal to the number of removed from play Water attribute monsters X100. If this card is destroyed by battle and would be removed from play instead equip this card to a monster on your opponents side of the field the equip monsters attack is halved.

 

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Neilsweaky

 

OCG: 6.5 (Not good)

Effect: 7.5 (Good efects but Naga Warchif is horrible)

Creativity: 8 (Could be better)

Name: 9 (Nice names XD)

PIC: 9 (I liked XD)

Overall: 40/50

 

Cocodomoco

 

OCG: 5.5 (You are a 5 Star could be better than that)

Effect: 7 (OP effects)

Creativity: 8 (Good)

Name: 9 (Nice too XD)

PIC: 6.5 (Vanillas in all of your pics)

Overall: 36/50

 

So my vote goes to Neilsweaky

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what do you mean vanillas in my pics his arent holo either oh and if you dont mind if your going to tel both of us our ocg is that bas ( i cheacked both ) then you should show us whats wrong and fix it because ive seen your cards and you clearly dont know ocg

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Neilsweaky:

 

Ocg= 10/10 (Pretty good OCG. There ARE errors but I'm not taking off points for minor errors.)

Effect= 8/10 (Most of them are slightly overpowered, and some even underpowered.)

Creativity= 7/10 (Not that creative IMO.)

Name= 10/10 (Nice names.)

Pic= 8/10 (pic of the last card doesn't fit.)

 

Total: 43/50

 

cocodomoco:

 

Ocg= 8/10 (There are some major errors.)

Effect= 8/10 (Same as NW. There are both underpowered and overpowered effects.)

Creativity= 10/10 (Your cards are the most creative IMO.)

Name= 9/10 (Nice names but not as good as NW.)

Pic= 7/10 (Didn't like the pics that much.)

 

Total: 42/50.

 

Vote goes to Neilsweaky.

 

EDIT: oops! I voted for cocodomoco! I wanted to vote for Neilswaky! Sorry.

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well if you really wanna I will show both OCG errors

 

1 card:Increase the ATK of this card by 400 during each of your Standby Phase. If you Normal Summoned a Level 3 monster this turn, active the following effect: If this card attacks a

face-up ATK Position monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to DEF of the attacked monster. For each turn a Continuous Trap Card you control, this card gains the effect: All battle damage inflicted to your Life Points is negated and inflicted on this card's ATK.

 

2 card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discard a number of Aqua-Type monster(s) from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each discarded monster. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

3 card:Dont have a spoiler so i will not fix it

 

4 card:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 face up WATER monsters you control. When a monster you control is destroyed, remove it from play.

 

5 card:When this card is Summoned increase it's ATK by each Aqua-Type monster removed from play x 100 until your End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle and would be removed from play, equip it to a monster your opponents control. The ATK of a monster equiped with this card is halved.

 

6 card:No spoiler, no fix

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well if you really wanna I will show both OCG errors

 

1 card:Increase the ATK of this card by 400 during each of your Standby Phase. If you Normal Summoned a Level 3 monster this turn' date=' active the following effect: If this card attacks a

face-up ATK Position monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to DEF of the attacked monster. For each turn a Continuous Trap Card you control, this card gains the effect: All battle damage inflicted to your Life Points is negated and inflicted on this card's ATK.

 

2 card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discard a number of Aqua-Type monster(s) from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each discarded monster. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

3 card:Dont have a spoiler so i will not fix it

 

4 card:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 face up WATER monsters you control. When a monster you control is destroyed, remove it from play.

 

5 card:When this card is Summoned increase it's ATK by each Aqua-Type monster removed from play x 100 until your End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle and would be removed from play, equip it to a monster your opponents control. The ATK of a monster equiped with this card is halved.

 

6 card:No spoiler, no fix

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the first one was helpful but in the secound one i wrote water attribute and thats what i ment the attribute is the element i did not mean the type


well some one voted for me on accident so dont count one of my votes and count it for you

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well if you really wanna I will show both OCG errors

 

1 card:Increase the ATK of this card by 400 during each of your Standby Phase. If you Normal Summoned a Level 3 monster this turn' date=' active the following effect: If this card attacks a

face-up ATK Position monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to DEF of the attacked monster. For each turn a Continuous Trap Card you control, this card gains the effect: All battle damage inflicted to your Life Points is negated and inflicted on this card's ATK.

 

2 card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discard a number of Aqua-Type monster(s) from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each discarded monster. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Aqua-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

3 card:Dont have a spoiler so i will not fix it

 

4 card:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 face up WATER monsters you control. When a monster you control is destroyed, remove it from play.

 

5 card:When this card is Summoned increase it's ATK by each Aqua-Type monster removed from play x 100 until your End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle and would be removed from play, equip it to a monster your opponents control. The ATK of a monster equiped with this card is halved.

 

6 card:No spoiler, no fix

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the first one was helpful but in the secound one i wrote water attribute and thats what i ment the attribute is the element i did not mean the type


well some one voted for me on accident so dont count one of my votes and count it for you

 

you still dont understand

the new rules are this - WATER monster not Water atribute monster understand now

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Neilsweaky

 

OCG - 7/10

Effect - 6/10 - Not very original.

Creativity - 7.5/10

Name - 9/10 - You did mess up on some capitalization.

Picture - 9.5/10 - Appealing pictures, love the 1st one.

 

Grand Total: 39/50 -- 78%

 

cocodomoco

 

OCG - 4/10 - It is IMPERATIVE that you work on your OCG and look at the tips. Do not bash others for their own mistakes like you did to Zeaux, it just sounds to childish, especially during a contest, where your looking for grades and tips.

Effect - 6/10 - Unoriginal :/

Creativity - 6.5/10 - A lot of similar monsters out there, all 3 are common.

Name - 6/10 - :/, all are "of the Sea". Your just basically changing the class of them.

Picture - 7/10 - Some are overused, I've used one of them before.

 

Grand Total: 29.5/50 -- 59%

 

 

 

You guys both have similar OCG errors, and make excessive mistakes in the OCG itself, which needs to be worked on. Take 5 minutes and read the Correct OCG thread, it helps alot, trust me. It was a well fought out contest, but my vote goes to Neilsweaky.

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