Deathkiller9000 Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Hey im new i wanted you to rate 2 of my cards plz feel free to give me feedback to inprove my card making here they are:is this better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tonyvi2222 Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Tonyvi2222, you barely posted 2 words, you could explain more and at least rate. I'll rate then. Overall, they're pretty mediocre. Overpowered (I never saw a Level 7 monster with 3500/3000... it's more the stats of a Level 10 or 11!) OCG is quite bad (you even used the old OCG term "on your side of the Field" ; you could write "on your Field", it's better and shorter), in short, it needs serious improvements.I didn't fix the lores, cause I just find the effects of your cards confusing. The picture you used for Devil Killer 25 is overused and blurry. Find another one.Also, the poll is useless. Rated C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenogears Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 OMG they both are an EPIC FAIL/10*Bad OCG*Bad Pic's*Bad cards name (Devil killer 25=Dante-.-)*Overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathkiller9000 Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Tonyvi2222' date=' you barely posted 2 words, you could explain more and at least rate. I'll rate then. Overall, they're pretty mediocre. Overpowered (I never saw a Level 7 monster with 3500/3000... it's more the stats of a Level 10 or 11!) OCG is quite bad (you even used the old OCG term "on your side of the Field" ; you could write "on your Field", it's better and shorter), in short, it needs serious improvements.I didn't fix the lores, cause I just find the effects of your cards confusing. The picture you used for Devil Killer 25 is overused and blurry. Find another one.Also, the poll is useless. [b']Rated C.[/b] thank you for giving me feedback so I can make my cards more better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 [align=center]You appear to be suffering from a bad case of 'Old-O.C.G- syndrome'. I recommend reading the OCG Thread and learning the new OCG words. The effects are OP(overpowered). Moderate errors, though i can still see how they work. If you would like private help with your cards, feel free to PM me on any queries you have.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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