Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 The new set calledPENGUIN UNDER WATERin this set are also the real "Penguin" card i remake the cards as tuner here are the cards of the set [spoiler=PUW-002 - PUW-010] comment/rate/help can you help me with more images ???when you have 1 image send a pm to me. everyone who send me a nice image get 1 + rep thank you all.hope you like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Seems like a decent card, with no OCG errors. 9/10One question though: Does the effect of this card apply to already existing "Penguin" cards (like Penguin Knight and Penguin Soldier)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 I guess it's pretty fine I guess I don't see much OCG errors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Seems like a decent card' date=' with no OCG errors. 9/10One question though: Does the effect of this card apply to already existing "Penguin" cards (like Penguin Knight and Penguin Soldier)?[/quote'] Apparently yes, it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 little OP i think maybe if was a WATER Tuner could be betterbut your OCG is good only the last part "by 100" try " x 100" i thimk is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 BUMP!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Some corrections:Frang - The Nice Mecha Penguin: Mashine -> MachineFlying Penguin: when this card is use -> when this card is used ; add them -> add it Anyway, somewhat simple but decent effects. 8/10 for the new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 you used pics from cards that already existsno ratewhy did you do this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 read the introducion please^^I fix the errorsI added new cards^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 yeah but you remaked them as tuneri dint like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 yea there basically same thing. But some of the other cards are OK. names are kinda bad but ur base ocg is immpressive for a new 4 star i must say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Thank you for comment my cardsany rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 OCG errors with Wirk - The Penguin Doctor of Chemie:chemie -> Chemiemonster -> monstersspell card -> Spell Cardfrom the monster your opponent control -> of a monster your opponent controls Outside that, my problem is that the cards all have very similar effects - I hoped for somewhat more variations, not just ATK / DEF boosts. 7/10 for the new cards, but if I see more variety in effects, I'll increase it to 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 very awsome set. a couple capalitization errors like "Spell Card" but good ocg otherwise. i LOVE the penguin dragon. its amazing, there is no other word fora a penguin that is that totallybadass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Thank you both for commentI fix the errorsI want to make more complex cards soon^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 i like the new ones. i dont see many ocg errors really. a couple mis spells, like on the last one you forgot the d in field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 ohhh^^i change now^^thank you for comment^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 a really solid and interesting work.....the minor OCG errors were already mentioned...from me, a rating of 7.78/9 Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greengamer Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 ausom cards my littel brother would love those cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 OCG fix for the trap cardTribute 1 "Penguim" monster. Destroy 1 monster your opponent control and inflict damage to both players equal to the half of the ATK of the tributed monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 "Penguin" and "controls", Zeaux! And what does your name mean? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 thank you for comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Cool Cards! Make more!9999999999999/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Thank you more comments please^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Hearts™ Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Alright, I guess... not to bad pics, and OCG is alright... 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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