Silent Omega Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 This is one of my new Fanfiction, so rate and comment, plz! Also, no negative comments such as 'This is bad' or 'This sucks S***!'. Anyways, plz enjoy this fanfiction. [spoiler=Theme Songs]Main Theme Song [spoiler=Plot]The Year is 3000, there appears to be portals that have opened wide across the seven continents, now, we prepare for a journey. Humans have been sent to the portals and none came. This Curse had lived for 1,000 years, and at the year 4209, something happened, that made everybody shocked. A human had returned from the portal, extreme old, he died shortly after he came out of the portal. The Portals were now rated Grade Z, by the leader of the World, and the portals were called 'The Devil's son'. The leader of the world, Connor Washington, had sent several teams of humans to the portal. The mission? Only to travel the Portal and destroy them... [spoiler=Book 1][spoiler=Prolouge]A young man walked along the streets of Avenue 7, he shortly stopped as cars zoomed by him, making the wind shuffle his hair. The man wore a blue jean, a black shirt and a white jacket. His hat flew around and his brown hair waved around. He sighed, as he grabbed his hat along the air, and then put it back on his head. He bit his fingernail as he continued walking, and a loud thud could be heard, he ignored it, hoping that whatever it was would go away. The shadows of a figure quickly ran past the man, who smirked. The figure then ran at full speed on the man, it stopped. There, showed a dog, his bald spots shining on the man, as he laughed. “Hello there…” The man said, he stretched his hand out to the dog, which bit it. The man yelped in pain, “Ow!!” He grabbed the dog by the neck, and then pulled it high, up. He punched it and let it go on the ground, and then he kicked it. After the dog was beaten up, it howled, and the dog laid, dead. Blood trickled down the dog’s body, and the man looked at it, as if it was food. He quickly took a quick glance around; nobody was looking, so he walked to the dog, kneeled down, and bit its chest. Sucking on it like a lollipop, he stopped, and then looked up. Somebody was behind him, a photographer; the photographer took a quick photo and ran away. The man followed the photographer, and finally caught him, jumping on him and then punching his body. *A policeman, probably the chief, looked at the photograph that the photographer had taken earlier. He spoke to another man, who wore black jeans, black shirt and his hair went downwards, while the chief wore a regular NYDPD (New York Delta Police Department). The man looked at the photo, “Look, Chief Masterson, that man had blood over his mouth, he looks as if he was sick, is he in any of the files?” Chief Masterson shook his head, “Nope, the only information we have from the files is that that man was arrested before, for murder, theft, and he ended it up by convincing someone to do Suicide, it’s crazy, I know, Jacob.” Jacob nodded. “No, I agree, it may come to conclusion that this man was from one of the Devil’s Son…” The Chief smiled. “That may be right, now...let’s finish this up…” Jacob nodded and got up. “Oh, say ‘hi’ to your daughter from me…” Jacob said, the Chief grinned, “Of course, did you find any relations about your son and my daughter?” This made Jacob laugh, “Well No, but I’m pretty sure they have a relationship!”*A young boy smiled, with a young girl by his side, the boy had blue jeans, a black shirt, and a blue jacket, and he had dashing black hair. The girl had a black dress; her hair was silver, reaching to her shoulders. They walked along the street, the buildings stood tall, the trees looked fresh and green and the flowers were colorful. The girl smiled, “Thanks for taking me here, Koruda…” She said, Koruda smiled, “Anything for you, Sylvia.” Koruda replied, “I like going to the park, anyway…” Sylvia chuckled and stopped, she sat down on a bench, and Koruda sat next to her. “Hey, Koruda, when’s your birthday?” Sylvia asked. Koruda thought for a moment, “May 25 is when I turn 14…” Sylvia nodded, “And you remember mine’s right? July 20?” Koruda nodded. “Of course…I’m not as forgetful as you!” He chuckled, Sylvia joined in, laughing. As they stopped, Sylvia went closer to Koruda, “Hey Koruda…I was wondering…” She said, Koruda looked at her, confused. “What?” He asked, Sylvia went a bit nervous, she blushed, “I was wondering if you want to go on a date with me…” Koruda looked shocked, “S-sure…” He said, “But I never thought of you asking me that…” Sylvia’s blush went away, “Wait…Y-you will?” She asked. Koruda nodded, “Sure, I’d like to be with you…” Now, this made Sylvia blush again. “T-tomorrow at night?” She asked, and Koruda nodded.*An old man walked along a high-technical building, this building was called SEOT (Special Experience Operations Team). The old man walked inside one of the rooms, the main base. “How’s the research going?” He asked, his voice barely a whisper. One of the workers looked at him, “its fine sir, you don’t need to get up from the SHT (Special Healings Team), just to look into the research…” She said. The old man shook his head, “No, No, No, I need to keep order here, and I still haven’t chosen the last and 7th team…” He croaked. The worker sighed, “Let’s go and look at the files, then…” [spoiler=Chapter 1:Pride]The old man looked at the screen of the computer, “Wait, we have a few members that we need…scroll back up.” He told the worker, she did as she was told. “Ooh, Look. That boy, he looks exactly like a perfect DE (Devil Exterminator), his father’s Jacob isn’t he?” He asked the worker, who nodded. “Yes but he’s too young. He’s only 13…” She replied, the old man shook his head. “There is no age! Remember that!” He said, “Besides, he looks just like his Grandfather…I remember him, the first one to rake notice of the portals, he was so young at that time…” The woman sighed, “Can we have flashbacks later? We’re due next week for team 7…”*Koruda and Sylvia walked back, the sun had gone down and the night appeared, covering the city with a blanket of darkness. As they reached Sylvia’s home they stopped, “Well…Good night, Sylvia…” Koruda said. Sylvia nodded, “Good night…” They chuckled nervously, and then they began to get closer and closer. They closed their eyes…they were within an inch’s range from their lips touching, until the door burst open and Chief Masterson came out, “HELLO GUYS!!” He shouted, chuckling at the same time. Sylvia and Koruda pulled away from each other, “Well, say goodbye to Koruda, dear…” The Chief said, seems like he didn’t notice it. Sylvia nodded, blushing a bit at the same time, “Yeah…G-goodbye Koruda…” She said, and then walked inside the house; the chief chuckled, and then closed the door. Koruda smiled, “Yeah…Goodbye.”+ -+-+-+ 23:00 +-+-+-+Jacob went inside Koruda’s room, where he was asleep in bed. He walked over to Koruda and softly hit him with his hand, “Son…Son…” He whispered. Koruda opened his eyes, “What is it?” He yawned. Jacob grinned, “I have good news, and you’ve just been accepted to be sent to the Devil’s son!”*Koruda quickly woke up from his bed, it was 6 in the morning and he needed to get to the SEOT. He quickly dressed himself, blue jean, black shirt, and ran out of the house. He reached the SEOT, and then went inside. He looked around, it was amazing, “So this is the SEOT…” He said, “Of course…” Another voice replied, it was the old man. “Oh, you must be Leader Watts…” He said. The old man nodded, and then indicated Koruda to follow him; Koruda followed and was awed as they walked inside the main base. “The others haven’t arrived yet, but they will…” Leader Watts replied. “Oh I forgot to ask you, sir!” Koruda said. “You must have mistaken me…I’m only a kid…I can’t go through the portals…” He finished. The old man smiled, “If you don’t have pride in yourself, how can you be so sure you can’t do it?” As he said that, Koruda had a feeling of respect for the leader, he knew what this feeling was…pride. [spoiler=Character app]It's obvious, I need more characters, so plz submit and help me! Name:Age: (13-40)Personality:Bio:Appearance:Will he/she be in the 7th team?:If so, will he/she die?:Weapons: (Future and Past Weapons Apply + Only 7th team members)Bio-Mechanism: (Yes, something I haven't explained before, look at the next spoiler for info + Only form 1, 2, and 4 are allowed)Trans-form race: (Any Race that you should be able to turn into) Gained Later in the story [spoiler= Extra]Here's the information, you might need. First, let me explain, Bio-Mechanism. You see, Bio-Mechanism is what happens to lost humans, after a human's death, a Bio-Mechanism, which is like a chip (No, not for eating) that is directly applied from the ear or mouth. The Bio-Mechanism can regenerate a person's life, but he/she who is given the Bio-Mechanism, is controlled until the chip is pulled out, but pulling the chip out would cause for the human to die...again. There are several types of Bio-Mechanicm and only 1 can be pulled out, leaving a Bio-human's life, well...alive. The types of chips are: X-Regen X-Regen is the type of Bio-Mechanism chip that is only applied to the heart, once it's been put on, that person will automatically regenarate once it dies, again. There's also a Bad-Side, Once the X-Regen is put on, it can never be pulled out and whoever puts on this chip, will die in 10 Days. Proto-403 This early form of the Bio-Mechanism chip is bad looking as it is bad working. This chip may destroy a person's life the instant it is put on the body, however, there is a 50% chance that it will work, and gives you a great boost. Z-Rare The Z-Rare is the highest form of Bio-Mechanism, the person that is applied to this will not only regenerate but actually be alive. Once the Z-Rare is pulled off, the human's life stays the same, and increases 20 more years on her/his lifespan. There are only 5 Z-Rare's in the world. D-Death The D-Death is the worst kind of chip, it kills anyone who applies it. It may be a bad haling chip but it is a good weapon, it can be attached to any body part, and it instantly kills, even to those that are alive! ======= Now, I have to explain the Races. I may update once a new Species is found. All these creatures are found inside the portals. No Database +++++++ More to be updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 it makes me wonder if upon returning from the portal what kind of curse has been brought to the Earth. Great chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Thanks for your comment ragnarok, you seem to have a gift to cheer people up :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 I agree with rangronok, this is good. and i won't bother submitting Agas, lets let her put her feet up ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Hehe, O.K. Also, I'm writing chapter 1, now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Cool, so im gessing we'll see it up by today then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Yep, I have enough time to make it today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 interesting idea but for the character app, i'm gonna need more info on this 7th team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Alright then. Chapter 1 up, sorry that it's so short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Its okay, its still good :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 It's ok for a small chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 a little bit shorter than I expected for the first chap, but since it's a good chap, I won't mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Thanks a lot guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 you going to put chap 2 up by tommorrow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Yeah, I'm staying home from School today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Might just be me but uh. Cliche? Idk, I just get the 'cliche' feeling when I look at the plot. *Shivers* All I have to say is that it's a bit small. That be all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Yeah' date=' I'm staying home from School today.[/quote'] Good to know. Just let us know when it's up, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 I don't really mind when it gets up, im patient :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 I don't either, but it's always nice to have someone inform you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 It sure is, so, when are you planning to post chapter 2 then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 That's what I hope for too, at least before the week is out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Sory guys, I haven't been on too. I've just had a spot of trouble with my parents and...well you could say they punished me. Anyways, I'll work on chapte 2 tomorrow, I'm very very sorry about this. I'll work on the chapter as soon as I wake up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 I understand what that's like. A lot of my friends had lack of updates due to parents' punishment for "thinking they had free will of their own" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Yeah, but I'll think I need a few characters, I don't really have a creative mind for Team 7. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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