carlynagisa_fan Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 Please comment on how to make it better! :) :)RAte it 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 First off, remove the text. It sucks.Try not to cover the render with white like that.Blend it more.Flow is wrong.Has no depth.Never center the focal.Effects are meh. Lets see if haris-sama agrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 First off' date=' remove the text. It sucks. [b']I agree[/b]Try not to cover the render with white like that.Actually, imo, it looks like he placed the white brushing first than the render on top.Blend it more. I agreeFlow is wrong. He should have flipped the render horizontally, then he would have had some flow but yes I agree.Has no depth. I agreeNever center the focal. People dont like to listen Seta D:I agree.Effects are meh. They sure are Lets see if haris-sama agrees. I bet he will ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 It looks like a render and a stock with some blending Good for a first ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 First off' date=' remove the text. It sucks. [b']I agree[/b]Try not to cover the render with white like that.Actually, imo, it looks like he placed the white brushing first than the render on top.Blend it more. I agreeFlow is wrong. He should have flipped the render horizontally, then he would have had some flow but yes I agree.Has no depth. I agreeNever center the focal. People dont like to listen Seta D:I agree.Effects are meh. They sure are Lets see if haris-sama agrees. I bet he will ;D That's weird, me too =o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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