My first few cards

[Rhaan]

yep, I'm no artist lol so sadly I just used some photobucket pictures of Anime' characters and stuff, just make stuff for fun and lolz

 

in order, they may actually make good, realistic game cards but I'm not sure if I worded every little thing right so meh...

 

 

 

 

the last card's effect:

This card can only be equipped to either "Rhaan" or "Mica". When this card is equipped to "Rhaan", place one Spell Counter on "Mica" each time "Rhaan" attacks or is attacked and is not destroyed during you or your opponent's Battle Phase. During your Main Phase, you may remove any number of Spell Counters from Mica to increase "Rhaan"'s ATK and DEF by 300 per Spell Counter. "Rhaan's" ATK and DEF return to normal at the end of your turn. When this card is equipped to "Mica", you may draw or play from your hand any 1 Spell Card during any phase of your turn once per turn. This Spell Card cannot be removed from "Rhaan" or "Mica" as long as both monsters remain on the field. If either "Rhaan" or "Mica" is destroyed, this card is removed from play.

 

 

 

rate if ya like, I was bored this morning xD

 

EDIT: edited them per the suggesstions offered the make them seem more OCG accurate

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Flamming on cards

[Exa Raiun]

*scracthes head* Okay, that's unexpected.

But I'm here to correct mistakes, so:

- Don't make up Types. Try to make a fitting , already existing Type for your cards. (Vampires are Zombie-Type in general, even though that guy surely doesn't look like a vampire, in my opinion, and the other monster can be Beast-Type, for example).

- Some OCG errors, including : face up => face-up ; special summoning => Special Summoning ; spell counter => Spell Counter.

 

While the idea is rather... unique, or how to say, it is actually doesn't seem to be either overpowered or underpowered. As for now, I present you a rating of 7.5/10.