Ayasato-chan Posted May 12, 2009 Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 Did this out of sudden inspiration. Rate/hate/comment please. [spoiler=Cards] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 10 Spell Cards with "Sympathy Spell" in their card names from play. When this card is Special Summoned, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If all of your Spell & Trap Card Zones are unoccupied, this card is unaffected by Spell, Trap & Monster effects. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand. Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. You can Tribute this card face-up to return 10 Spell Cards that were removed from play with "Sympathy Spell" in their card names to the top of your Deck. [spoiler=Credit]http://images.google.com/images?sourceid=navclient&rlz=1T4GWYA_enUS312US312&q=Dark%20Anime%20Girls&um=1&ie=UTF-8&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Really? No comments at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crosspath Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 I like how you used Anime to create your cards :)!!! 8/10 i see minimal OCG errors , but im bot perfect either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Why thank you. And bless you for being the first to comment. OCG I'm a little rusty with, so I can understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Fixes (In order): Increase your Life Points equal to half the original ATK of the monster. (last sentence of card 1) Take control of the selected monster (last sentence of card 2) shift = change (card 3) due to = by, their = his/her, reshuffle = shuffle it, Then draw 6 cards. (card 4) due to = by (cards 5, 6, 7, & 9) opponent (spelling error - card 8.) (Fix for card 11 is below) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 10 "Sympathy Spell" Spell Cards. When this card is Special Summoned, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each monster on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If all Spell & Trap Card Zones on your field are unoccupied, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell, Trap & Monster Cards. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. You can Tribute this card face-up to return 10 "Sympathy Spell" Spell Cards that were removed from play to the top of your Deck.______________________________________________________ Very ... emotional? Not too bad, though I'd consider less blurred pics. The last card's pic is overused. Nonetheless, interesting idea.______________________________________________________ 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shatteredfox Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 [spoiler=Cards] like above said, not much OCG that I can tell(granted I suck at detecting them :P so don't take my advice.) and I like most of them(some are iffy for me for some reasons, however I couldn't think properly because the 8th card got me) By now you probably noticed I only quoted one of your card, She's a girl from "Ever 17" in which she has a really sad ending(trying not to spoil) one of the only books to ever make me break down and do a massive man cry for hours. TSUGUMI! D= WHY!!!=========================*pushes away teary spam* anyways, yeah I like the cards and I'll probably be able to give you better information when I read them, but for now 9/10 from me. EDIT: quick edit before I truly edit, just noticed the irony of the name of the 8th card. Considering her character, granted google does that...alot... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 The spells should be quick-plays... They have no way of activation unless they are (You can't chain any action, which is needed here, with a normal spell) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Fixes (In order): Increase your Life Points equal to half the original ATK of the monster. (last sentence of card 1) Take control of the selected monster (last sentence of card 2) shift = change (card 3) due to = by' date=' their = his/her, reshuffle = shuffle it, [b']Then[/b] draw 6 cards. (card 4) due to = by (cards 5, 6, 7, & 9) opponent (spelling error - card 8.) (Fix for card 11 is below) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 10 "Sympathy Spell" Spell Cards. When this card is Special Summoned, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for each monster on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If all Spell & Trap Card Zones on your field are unoccupied, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell, Trap & Monster Cards. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. You can Tribute this card face-up to return 10 "Sympathy Spell" Spell Cards that were removed from play to the top of your Deck.______________________________________________________ Very ... emotional? Not too bad, though I'd consider less blurred pics. The last card's pic is overused. Nonetheless, interesting idea.______________________________________________________ 7.5/10 Your really kind. Though I seem to be losing my touch as I've already said. I know the last pic is overused, but it just... FIT. You know what I'm saying right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 The spells should be quick-plays... They have no way of activation unless they are (You can't chain any action' date=' which is needed here, with a normal spell)[/quote'] In case you didn't see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crosspath Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 The spells should be quick-plays... They have no way of activation unless they are (You can't chain any action' date=' which is needed here, with a normal spell)[/quote'] In case you didn't see... Yea if they were quick plays they would be more... uhh.. activatable! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 The spells should be quick-plays... They have no way of activation unless they are (You can't chain any action' date=' which is needed here, with a normal spell)[/quote'] In case you didn't see... Yea if they were quick plays they would be more... uhh.. activatable! I already noticed. But thanks for pointing that out. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morpheous Erebos Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Bump for ya' Aya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 I like these cards. The images are cute and the effect is interesting. The monster is quite interesting. Keep up the good work. 9/10 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Darkersheep Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 *Hey, Icyblue can edit my posts. Telling me not to post my card unless its in contests or my own thread,* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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