chizuruotohime Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Here are the updated Fancy Hero monsters that formely Normal Monsters.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Great! Seems like you managed to find fitting effects for the cards, it's nice to see! Fancy Hero Athena:Considering that most probably it will be easy to have more Fancy Hero monsters on the field, its effect can be useful with proper protection.Fancy Hero Erminguard:Defence display supposed to be Defense Position. Seems like a good stalling monster... maybe a bit too good with its "cannot be destroyed in battle" effect, I can't really decide~Fancy Hero Lucie:Instead of "this card's Attack Power" , use "the ATK of this card". A Level 3 monster which can temporary have 2000 ATK... but because its original ATK is not too high, it seems balanced.Fancy Hero Statica:A good counter against FLIP effect monsters. A bit gimmicky, but good.As for these, my rating is a nice 8.5/10. Keep up the good work! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Great! Seems like you managed to find fitting effects for the cards' date=' it's nice to see! Fancy Hero Athena:Considering that most probably it will be easy to have more Fancy Hero monsters on the field, its effect can be useful with proper protection.Fancy Hero Erminguard:Defence display supposed to be [b']Defense Position[/b]. Seems like a good stalling monster... maybe a bit too good with its "cannot be destroyed in battle" effect, I can't really decide~Fancy Hero Lucie:Instead of "this card's Attack Power" , use "the ATK of this card". A Level 3 monster which can temporary have 2000 ATK... but because its original ATK is not too high, it seems balanced.Fancy Hero Statica:A good counter against FLIP effect monsters. A bit gimmicky, but good.As for these, my rating is a nice 8.5/10. Keep up the good work! ^^ thank you for the support and the corrections~~! Can I have a request, can you make at least 1 support Monster or Magic or Trap card?? It's ok if you don't. Much appreciated~~!! Thanks again and I'll do my best and hope my artist finnishes the third set~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
power ranger man Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 very good8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 thank you for the support and the corrections~~! Can I have a request' date=' can you make at least 1 support Monster or Magic or Trap card?? It's ok if you don't. Much appreciated~~!! Thanks again and I'll do my best and hope my artist finnishes the third set~~!![/quote'] I'll try to think about some support cards, if you can provide an art(or arts, if I have more ideas). I'll PM you when I have my ideas! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 A few OCG corrections and these four will be ready for battle (I'm actually quite interested in these, by the way; are you going to create fusions and counterparts to the other Heroes?): Athena: Because "Fancy Hero" is an archetype with a distinct identifier (i.e., 'Fancy Hero' VS 'Hero'), you can say (as you did with Erminguard) '"Fancy Hero" monster' instead of 'monster with "Fancy Hero" in its card name' . . . here's a suggestion for some OCG: This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly if you control a "Fancy Hero" monster other than this card. Erminguard: This is kind of powerful, but the metagame does seem to have enough ways to subvert her that she isn't horribly broken. Though . . . there could be some OCG changes (and overall simplification of effect). Try this, if you want: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot select a "Fancy Hero" monster you control other than "Fancy Hero Erminguard" as an attack target. Note: I didn't know if you wanted Erminguard to be able to Marauding-Lock or not, so I wrote it so that the opponent could only select Erminguards to attack, rather than going the path of Marauding and wording it 'While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot select another "Fancy Hero" monster you control as an attack target.' Lucie: So close! Just one little tweak and you have proper OCG -- change 'Attack Power' to 'ATK' in the card's effect and you're golden! Statica: Good, good, but it can be made just a tad better (no offense -- I only mean to help). However, I'm having a bit of a stumbling point here . . . Y'see, I know that you want to make it so that the effects that activate when the face-downs are flipped don't work, but none of the cards I'm referencing really have anything good that doesn't seem too narrow or too clunky (that is, Ceasefire = too narrow; The Stern Mystic = too clunky). So, I'll just offer you what I can from my own head: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Set Monster Cards face-down. If there is a face-down Monster(s) when this card is Summoned, flip them face-up (effects do not activate at this time). But yeah, this is quite an inventive (and interesting) series you've come up with -- I'll be keeping an eye on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Note: I didn't know if you wanted Erminguard to be able to Marauding-Lock or not' date=' so I wrote it so that the opponent could only select Erminguards to attack, rather than going the path of Marauding and wording it 'While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot select another "Fancy Hero" monster you control as an attack target.'[/quote'] Also, there is the possiblity of using Erminguard and another Fancy Hero monster equipped with Raregold Armor for a similar locking style, I think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Really appreciated the OCG fixes and the comments of you guys~~! Actually, while I was planning on Erminguard's effect, I too was confused on what shall I write about it....And Lucie too....2000 ATk for a LVL 3 monster for Battle only....hehheheh Though I have planned for a Skyscraper=Skyscraper 2 field magic card for the Fancy Heroes! Just to clear out Erminguard's effect I would like to write that:"When there are 1 or more monsters on your side of the field with "Fancy Hero" in their names except this card and this card is in Defence Position, it's effect are activated. - your opponent cannot select a "Fancy Hero" monster as attack targets except "Fancy Hero Erminguard". - this card will not be destroyed in battle. Thank you baroque-san and exa rauin-san for the support~~!! And yeah, I'm planning with the fusions and the synchro monster and some support magic trap cards...And yeah exa rauin san, do PM me if you have some ideas...and I'll ...I mean my artist would supply an art for the support~~!!A few OCG corrections and these four will be ready for battle (I'm actually quite interested in these' date=' by the way; are you going to create fusions and counterparts to the other Heroes?): Athena: Because "Fancy Hero" is an archetype with a distinct identifier (i.e., 'Fancy Hero' VS 'Hero'), you can say (as you did with Erminguard) '"Fancy Hero" monster' instead of 'monster with "Fancy Hero" in its card name' . . . here's a suggestion for some OCG: This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly if you control a "Fancy Hero" monster other than this card. Erminguard: This is kind of powerful, but the metagame does seem to have enough ways to subvert her that she isn't horribly broken. Though . . . there could be some OCG changes (and overall simplification of effect). Try this, if you want: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot select a "Fancy Hero" monster you control other than "Fancy Hero Erminguard" as an attack target. Note: I didn't know if you wanted Erminguard to be able to Marauding-Lock or not, so I wrote it so that the opponent could only select Erminguards to attack, rather than going the path of Marauding and wording it 'While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot select another "Fancy Hero" monster you control as an attack target.' Lucie: So close! Just one little tweak and you have proper OCG -- change 'Attack Power' to 'ATK' in the card's effect and you're golden! Statica: Good, good, but it can be made just a tad better (no offense -- I only mean to help). However, I'm having a bit of a stumbling point here . . . Y'see, I know that you want to make it so that the effects that activate when the face-downs are flipped don't work, but none of the cards I'm referencing really have anything good that doesn't seem too narrow or too clunky (that is, Ceasefire = too narrow; The Stern Mystic = too clunky). So, I'll just offer you what I can from my own head: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Set Monster Cards face-down. If there is a face-down Monster(s) when this card is Summoned, flip them face-up (effects do not activate at this time). But yeah, this is quite an inventive (and interesting) series you've come up with -- I'll be keeping an eye on this.[/quote'] thank you baroque san~~!! If you want to see all other Fancy Hero I made so far, look at this post....Athena and others were normal monsters back then.... http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118927.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 wow, nice cards, keep up the good work8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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