My attempt at a Naruto Set (despite how overdone this theme is)

[Yami-Atemu]

Hello, I'm sure none of you know me since I'm spanking new here. Anyway, saw some crappy Naruto cards made and said hey, let me give it a shot despite how I have a hunch it's overdone. Well here I go (wasn't sure how to make it a button or whatever you call that hide picture thing)

 

Set: Hidden Ninja (HDNJ) set for rename

 

Card Lore: Known as the most Hyper-Active Knuckle Headed Ninja, this ninja has great aspirations to become the next Hokage

 

Card Lore: As the sole survivor of the Uchiha Massacre, this ninja aims to gain as much strength as possible with help from his friends to achieve his main objective.

 

Card Lore: A lazy ninja with the IQ of over 200, the only thing he truly has ambitions for is to watch the clouds.

 

Card Lore: You can sacrifice this monster to take control of one Lvl 5 or lower monster for 2 turns. After two turns the controlled monster is then destroyed.

 

Rarity: Super Rare

Card Lore: Despite being a lovesick fangirl, she strains to prove that she can be just as capable ninja as anyone else, especially Ino.

 

Rarity: Rare

Card Lore: Activate if you have a "Konoha Ninja; Sakura" on the field. Increase the attack the monster by half it's attack points for 1 turn.

 

And that's all I got for now. Yes I made Sakura of all people Rare. I did it because nobody expected it that's why. And this is my first official card posting. Enjoy

[Monkey]

Just like every other Naruto set out there. They FAIL. Your OCG needs some work, I'm pretty sure the images have been used before. People don't like Vanillas.

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

some people have a hard time thinking of effect's that match the character's abilities in the show.

so i wont say anything about the lack of effect.

 

 

but the ATK point's are a bit off.

Sasuke and Naruto are about the same strength, if anything Sasuke is a little bit stronger.

so they should have about the same ATK.

 

Same for Sakura and Ino, there ATK & DEF should be the same.

[Yami-Atemu]

Just like every other Naruto set out there. They FAIL. Your OCG needs some work' date=' I'm pretty sure the images have been used before. People don't like Vanillas.

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Alright I figured there'd be a pessimistic person with no suggestion of improvement, but that's ok. It's whatever. Although I understand your phlight of nobody likes Vanilla (I'm more of a chocolate man myself), you can't just have every single card an effect or ritual/fusion summon monster in a pack. If you find a REAL pack with no vanilla cards, then come back to me. But of course, I will put in more effect monsters. As for the images, I tried my best to find good stuff since I didn't feel like making magic for pop culture cards, but hey like I said, this is an overdone theme I wouldn't be suprised if the images were used. But eh whatever, they're not realistic cards.

 

some people have a hard time thinking of effect's that match the character's abilities in the show.

so i wont say anything about the lack of effect.

 

 

but the ATK point's are a bit off.

Sasuke and Naruto are about the same strength' date=' if anything Sasuke is a little bit stronger.

so they should have about the same ATK.

 

Same for Sakura and Ino, there ATK & DEF should be the same.

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I had similar thoughts in mind, but my favor of Naruto over Sasuke (although my favorite character is Gaara), got the better of me. That and I meant to change Naruto's attack but forgot. As for Ino and Sakura, had the same thought in mind. Yet with such an effect that I made for Ino, I thought I tone her attack strength down a bit. But I guess I'll post their attack strength the same. Though then I'll have to give Sakura one more support card to match strengths. So I guess I'll change it along with add some more cards. As for the OCG, you can't expect much from simple effects and vanilla card Lores. Ja Ne

[Sora]

Shikamaru and Sakura have abit more ATK and DEF then 3 star monsters should have. Oh and just like the 2nd poster, try to add effects. Oh and on Ino, you wrote 2 turns, then you wrote Two turns, it should just be 2 turns i think.