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[spoiler=Effect]This card can not be normal summoned or set. When this card is special summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to gain 600 life points. During your standby phases you can pay 200 life points to destroy 1 spell card on your opponents side of the field. During each of your end phases you can destroy this card to gain 1500 life points.

 

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The pic i like^_^

I think it would be better if this card was a Spellcaster-Type monster.

Some OCG errors. Most of them involve capitalization of the first letters for some works like

Special Summoned, Normal Summoned or Set, Spell Card, etc...

 

Seems to have interesting effect. Needs a little balancing though. This card can be improved^_^

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King of Halloween

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Special Summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to gain 600 Life Point's. During your Standby Phase's you can pay 200 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. During each of your End Phase's you can destroy this card to gain 1500 Life Point's.

 

I Think It's More Of A Spellcaster-Type Than Warrior,It's Name Would Be Better If It Was Called "King of All'Hallowseve".

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The pic i like^_^

I think it would be better if this card was a Spellcaster-Type monster.

Some OCG errors. Most of them involve capitalization of the first letters for some works like

Special Summoned' date=' Normal Summoned or Set, Spell Card, etc...

 

Seems to have interesting effect. Needs a little balancing though. This card can be improved^_^

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OCG/Grammar Fix:

 

King of Halloween

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Special Summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to gain 600 Life Point's. During your Standby Phase's you can pay 200 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. During each of your End Phase's you can destroy this card to gain 1500 Life Point's.

 

I Think It's More Of A Spellcaster-Type Than Warrior' date='It's Name Would Be Better If It Was Called "King of All'Hallowseve".

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This card can not be normal summoned or set. When this card is special summoned you can discard 1 card from your hand to gain 600 life points. During your standby phases you can pay 200 life points to destroy 1 spell card on your opponents side of the field. During each of your end phases you can destroy this card to gain 1500 life points.

i don't think you should put EACH OF you end phases, sence it involves destroying him, therefor it would only be able to be use one time, unless you revive him.

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