Dark Dread Reborn

[Diableos Auros]

Well, this is my new DARK, mainly Zombie-Type, card set. I am trying quite hard on these cards as I know some of my old cards have been a bit tacky. Please rate them and leave a decent comment. If there are any typos, OCG errors, etc, please point them out to me. Also, please remember that I prefer the old OCG rules and that I have shown these to several people already.

 

Set Information:

 

Everyone knows that the general idea of a Zombie is that they like to reap you of your life, and with this card set, I've taken that idea into account. For instance, the Spell & Trap cards balance on using your Life Points to take your opponent's, and some of the monsters have roughly an enhanced Man-Eater Bug sort of effect that has a bigger effect for both sides.

 

Undead Knight

DDR-EN001

DARK / Level 8

Zombie / Effect

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 or more monsters from your Graveyard from play. The ATK and DEF of this card becomes the number of cards removed from play by this effect x 500.

ATK/ ? DEF/ ?

 

Undead Mage

DDR-EN002

DARK / Level 6

Zombie / Effect

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle while it is in face-up Attack Position. During your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon a Zombie-Type monster that was destroyed by battle by paying 500 Life Points.

ATK/ 1000 DEF/ 1000

 

Undead Soul

DDR-EN003

DARK / Level 4

Zombie / Effect

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle while there is another face-up Zombie-Type monster on your side of the field. Destroy this card if there are no other Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 700 during each of your Standby Phases. If you pay 500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly.

ATK/ 0 DEF/ 0

 

Cemetary World

DDR-EN004

Field Spell

As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you can activate the following effects:

- If a Zombie-Type monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field.

- If a Zombie-Type monster you control is removed from play, you can pay 500 Life Points to decrease your opponent's Life Points by 1000.

- During each of your Standby Phases, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard.

[Diableos Auros]

Bump.

[Freezyefc]

Undead Knight: Not bad, but it's a pointless "semi-nomi"(semi-nomis are monsters that can only be Special Summoned by bla bla bla), since you're most likely not going to reborn this guy when it dies + plus it needs 6 monz in gy for 3000 ATK (hmm.lightsworn?) 7/10

 

Undead Mage: Tomato-able, so it's not bad.. Fair enough effect 6/10

 

Undead Soul: A little slow though, but at least it won't die if you have another zombie :) 6/10

 

Cemetary World: Effects 1 & 2 are ok, but 3 is really good 8/10

 

As a whole: 6/10 for me

 

Seems like cards I would see back when I was playing competitive YGO (way back in 2005-2006), text-wise. Very old-school :)

[Diableos Auros]

Undead Knight: Not bad' date=' but it's a pointless "semi-nomi"(semi-nomis are monsters that can only be Special Summoned by bla bla bla), since you're most likely not going to reborn this guy when it dies + plus it needs 6 monz in gy for 3000 ATK (hmm.lightsworn?) 7/10

 

Undead Mage: Tomato-able, so it's not bad.. Fair enough effect 6/10

 

Undead Soul: A little slow though, but at least it won't die if you have another zombie :) 6/10

 

Cemetary World: Effects 1 & 2 are ok, but 3 is really good 8/10

 

As a whole: 6/10 for me

 

Seems like cards I would see back when I was playing competitive YGO (way back in 2005-2006), text-wise. Very old-school :)

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Thanks. But as I said, I prefer the old OCG and TCG rules, etc.

[Diableos Auros]

Bump.

 

>Why does hardly anyone visit the Written Cards section and/or hardly posts here?<

[ironmanben]

Sounds like an interesting idea.

[玄魔の王]

Bump.

 

>Why does hardly anyone visit the Written Cards section and/or hardly posts here?<

 

Most likely because they feel cards without any art aren't as worth their time as those with it.

 

The set seems fairly straight-forward. Zombies + removal + power-ups = KICKASS. 7/10 from me.

[Diableos Auros]

Sounds like an interesting idea.

 

Thanks.

 

Bump.

 

>Why does hardly anyone visit the Written Cards section and/or hardly posts here?<

 

Most likely because they feel cards without any art aren't as worth their time as those with it.

 

The set seems fairly straight-forward. Zombies + removal + power-ups = KICKASS. 7/10 from me.

 

Oh, alright.

 

Thanks though. ^^ More to come whenever I actually get some spare time.

[Diableos Auros]

Oh' date=' some nice cards. You might want to look at the wording on the first one. As it is, easy SS and as it is, I think it gets 500 for ALL rfg cards. I think you meant 'the ATK and DEF of this card becomes the number of cards removed from play [b']by this cards effect[/b] x 500' Otherwise, that could really be broken, easy 6500 with necroface, 11500 with two o.o Current effect, 5/10 for being broken as hell if I read it right. If the effect changed/I made a mistake, 7/10

 

Undead Mage; I really like this one, it's balanced and fits zombie's theme, not a lot to say 7/10

 

Undead Soul; Generally a weak card. If you maybe gave it 1000-1500 starting atk it would be usable 6/10

 

Field; I like it a lot, it's awesome to see a new field for zombies. Zombie world was good but I always like choice in this matter. The effect is good, the last one might be a bit too powerful for only 500 LP but still nice. Like I said, I like what this could do to Zombies 7.5/10

 

Overall, great set which give some nice options to zombies, solid 6.5/10, 7/10 if Undead Knight only gets power from his effect.

 

Thanks.

 

But no, the wording in the last sentance for Undead Knight is fine...

 

"The ATK and DEF becomes the number of cards removed from play x 500." If I meant what you though, then surely I would've put, "The ATK and DEF of this card becomes the total ATK and DEF of each monster removed by play." Or something along those lines. :S

[Diableos Auros]

Um' date=' you seem to have misheard me, I didn't say anything about their total levels, just that "the number of cards removed from play x 500" doesn't sound like it means only cards RFG'd by the effect. So if you had 15 RFG cards already. Then removed 3 to summon him, you'd have 18 RFG, so get 9000 atk

o.o

And if your opponent had 4 as well, he'd get another 2000 o.o

Is their some oddity of OCG I don't know at play here?

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You seem to have misheard me... I never said anything about total levels. x3

 

But yeah, I see what you mean now and I have edited it. Thanks.