Amaterasu Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 OK This A Fan-Fic For My New Set.[spoiler=The Only Chapter]In A Parallel Universe There Is A Game That Is Know As Shadow Monsters. The Game Is Similar To Duel Monsters But The Cards Are All DARK. Pegasus Found This Parallel Universe And Made Cards Based Off Of The Things He Saw There. The First Set He Made Was Called Magic User's Requiem. Most Were The Spellcasters He Saw There. Similar To The Dark Magicians The "Parallel Magicians" Have Similar Effects, But Have Twists To Their Effects. All The Cards Are Secret Rare And First Edition. The Other Cards He Made Are Some Of The Unique Cards He Saw. Who Wouldn't Like A Set Made From A Parallel Universe. Comment Or Don't As You Wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted May 15, 2009 Report Share Posted May 15, 2009 [align=center]That is not a chapter, that is a paragraph.A small paragraph >.>[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Meh. Don't Need A Whole Lot. It Is Just An Intro To My New Set. That Is A Lot Longer Than The Paragraphs I Wrote In Honor's English Too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 That paragraph contains too much capp'd letters. Fix it, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 You Know What. I'm Getting Tired Of People Hating Me Because Of My Caps. Get Out If You Don't Like How I Type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Every word begins with a cap, and you have some grammatical errors. On top of that, it is like 5-7 sentences. Barely a paragraph... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 [align=center]Seriously aleisteir, you didn't use to type like that;I think you just copied Cove because for some deranged reason you think it looks good >.>Also there is nothing at all to rate.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 [align=center]Seriously aleisteir' date=' you didn't use to type like that;I think you just copied Cove because for some deranged reason you think it looks good >.>[/align']Haha, that sounds true. Anyways, I'm not commenting on it, even if it is an Intro, it needs to be longer then 1 Paragraph. Now, I'm out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 =o All the posts so far are 'This'able. So I'm just going to repeat them =D Longer. Don't Type Like This. Grammer pl0x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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