Kenji™ Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 [align=center]Plz rate rate rate [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Nein! You centtered the focal!The blur behind the render is really bad.There is no good flow.It doesn't blend.There are no effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenji™ Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 [align=center]Nein! You centtered the focal! Y not?The blur behind the render is really bad. Uhm.. can changeThere is no good flow. I better go read some tutsIt doesn't blend. ^There are no effects. Actually' date=' there're lots of effects[/b'][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 [align=center]Nein! You centtered the focal! Y not? Never center it.The blur behind the render is really bad. Uhm.. can change You should.There is no good flow. I better go read some tuts Yes' date=' I agree[/i']It doesn't blend. ^ YayThere are no effects. Actually, there're lots of effects Yes, but they're bad.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 I like it, but as Seta said, look at some tutorials. You can join me! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenji™ Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 [align=center]LolOk, new ver added[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 That new version is OK: the dissolve on her shoulder ruins it.your lightings messed up.the render looks stuck on.not much flow, some depth. keep working on it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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