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This card is GRUESOME!!! >o<(Give a 1 rep to some one who finds a better name!)


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My newest and latest creation:

 

[spoiler=Gruesome Golem]

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FLIP: Change the Battle Positions of all monsters you control. Every time a monster changes their Battle Position, remove the top card of your Deck from play and place 1 Gruesome Counter on this card. For every Gruesome Counter on this card, increase its ATK by 100. Whenever this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Tribute this card to select 1 of your removed from play monsters with an ATK lower than this cards current ATK and that has a Level lower than or equal to the amount of Gruesome Counters on this card and Special Summon it to your field in Attack Position.

 

 

 

Art by: Father Wolf.

 

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When ever = When

your side of the field = your field

Corrected Zeaux

 

"When a monster changes its Battle Position," (Never use Every time, and when referring to a single monster, do not use their.)

 

"Increase this cards ATK by 100 for every Gruesome Counter on it. " (Your phrase was in reverse order. Mkae it as short as possible, that's what Konami says!)

 

do not capitalize tribute.

 

current is not needed. its either ATK or original ATK.

 

Hope i helped. I like the card, very original. It's quite interesting. So it's basically a Summoner. You should made it Rock Summoning Beast. Gruesome Golem is quite a weird name. There is nothing gruesome about it >.<

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don't cap tribute is wrong. Tribute is usually capped.

 

But thanks :)

 

tribute is only capped if proceeded by summon' date=' other than that, it's lowercase. ^_^

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every = each

 

The rest of the OCG is already corrected

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I like the pic edit that you've done. ^_^

 

The idea is ok, but I kinda agree with Essence on the name.

 

7.5/10

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