First Card(s). Rate?

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Effect: This card can also be treated as a DARK monster. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or lower "Benthic" Monsters. Once per turn, you can place 2 Glow Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put on it 1 Glow Counter. once per turn, you can remove 5 Glow Counters from this card to Advance Summon 1 "Glow Token"(Sea Serpent-Type/WATER/3 Star/ATK 700/DEF 700). When a "Glow Token" is destroyed, the controller gains 300 Life Points.

 

First card. I THINK the OCG was good... T.T

 

Rate please?

 

I was also thinking of either doing the "Benthic Environment" Set or a set on Elemental Wolves, so here is my first Elemental Wolf card.

 

 

Effect:This card can only be Advance Summoned by Releasing 2 WATER type cards with "Ookami" in their name. Once per turn, as long as this card remains Face-up on the field, you can decrease the ATK of all EARTH monsters on the field by 100.

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A card made by a noob who knows what OCG is O.o it is the sign of the apocalypse.

 

Well not bad, but replace

 

side of field=you control/opponent controls

Number=With their symbols

"Benthic" monster

Advance=Special

Release=Tribute

in battle=by battle

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Thanks. :D I'm fixing it now.

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A card made by a noob who knows what OCG is O.o it is the sign of the apocalypse.

 

Well not bad' date=' but replace

 

side of field=you control/opponent controls

Number=With their symbols

"Benthic" monster

Advance=Special

Release=Tribute

in battle=by battle

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I am impressed as well. You must have done some OCG research. I like a talented new member

Anyways, nice job

KIU

[Zeaux]

hey your first time was better than mine O_O good job :D

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I think I corrected all the errors...

[Skyson]

Old:

"This card can also be treated as a DARK monster. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or lower "Benthic" Monsters. Once per turn, you can place 2 Glow Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put on it 1 Glow Counter. once per turn, you can remove 5 Glow Counters from this card to Advance Summon 1 "Glow Token"(Sea Serpent-Type/WATER/3 Star/ATK 700/DEF 700). When a "Glow Token" is destroyed, the controller gains 300 Life Points."

 

A full fix, changes in bold:

"This card [can also be/is also (your choice)] treated as a DARK monster. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or lower "Benthic" monsters. Once per turn, you can place 2 Glow Counters on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can put 1 Glow Counter on it. Once per turn, you can remove 5 Glow Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Glow Token" (Sea Serpent-Type/WATER/3 Star/ATK 700/DEF 700). When a "Glow Token" is destroyed, the controller of that Token gains 300 Life Points."

 

 

Pretty good OCG for a new member. It's refreshing.

 

The effect is rather underpowered. 5 counters for a potential 300 Life Points? You have to wait 2 turns to pull it off, at best, you could probably get a higher payoff, like 800 Life Points or something. Really, push it a little, anything that has to survive for 2 or more turns with relatively little means of self-protection deserves to mess with Life Points a little bit.

 

7/10 now, keep it up.