C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 These aren't technically my first cards, But their the first one's I'm trying to make balanced, Other cards I made were for fun and I doubt I'd post them. Man, This is starting to look more like a set then just a couple of cards XD. Even made a booster pack! XD Monsters: Sierra's Effect: "Aussa the Earth Charmer" + "Eria the Water Charmer" + "Hiita the Fire Charmer" + "Wynn the Wind Charmer"This cards Attribute is also treated as EARTH, FIRE, WATER and WIND. Once per turn, You can select and take control of 1 monster on your opponents side of the field that shares a Attribute with this card, This effect is not applied if you already have control of 1 of your opponents monsters. Hiita the Blazing Warriors Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 card with "Hiita" in it's name.Once per turn, You can take control of 1 FIRE monster your opponent controls OR Tribute 1 FIRE monster you control to deal damage to your opponent equal to the tributed monsters level X200. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in either players Graveyard, If this card is targeted by the effect of an opponents Trap Card, You can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the activation and the effect of the Trap card and destroy it. Wynn the Storming Genie's Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 card with "Wynn" in it's name.Once per turn, You can take control of 1 WIND monster your opponent controls OR Tribute 1 WIND monster you control to send 1 card your opponent controls to the bottom of their Deck. This card gains 200 ATK for each WIND monster in either players Graveyard. If a Effect is activated during the Battle Phase which would destroy 1 or more cards you control. You can Tribute 1 other WIND Monster to Negate that cards activation and return it to the owners hand Eria the Freezing Ice Skater's Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 card with "Eria" in it's name.Once per turn, You can take control of 1 WATER monster your opponent controls OR Tribute 1 WATER monster you control to look at your opponents hand. This card gains 200 ATK for each WATER monster in either players Graveyard. If this card were to be destroyed by an opponents Monster Effect, you can discard 2 cards to Negate that cards Effect and look at your opponents hand, afterwards you can remove from play 1 Spell or Trap card in your opponents hand, if they do not have a Spell or Trap card to remove, your opponent must select 1 card in their hand and remove it from play. If it was a monster who's level is equal to Level 7 or higher, you take 1000 damage. Spells: Traps: Image credit: Found on a website called Pixiv (Japanese Website), I made Hikari the Light Charmer and Familiar Possessed - Hikari Tuners cause sooner or later I plan on making the Adult Form, And she'll be a Synchro. NOTE: I found Sierra's Image WAY before I saw Aonon's Signature, So I did NOT take the image from his card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Just one thing now the new OCG is monster from your side of the field = monster you control i give you a 8/10 i liked the idea but not that much the pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 standard element charmer cards. okay. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Zeaux: Thanks, Edited, And about the pics: Only one's I could find that had normal and FP, I was gonna use this one (Light Charmer Alternate) for the Normal Charmer until I found these two, Eh, I'll post that one up as well XD. Aonon:Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 ^^ no prob. i always did like the element charmers ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 lol, Wow, So one else who likes the Charmers, I thought me and a couple others were the only ones XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 lol a while ago i made some supprt cards for them. deleted them though. maybe i should redo them...hmm....*ponders* lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 lol, I wouldn't mind seeing them XD, I wouldn't mind seeing anything Charmer related XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Thanks, Maybe I should make more cards as Balanced as I can XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Zeaux: Thanks' date=' Edited, And about the pics: Only one's I could find that had normal and FP, I was gonna use this one (Light Charmer Alternate) for the Normal Charmer until I found these two, Eh, I'll post that one up as well XD. Aonon:Thanks. tha pic is preety good I think you should use it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Zeaux: Thanks' date=' Edited, And about the pics: Only one's I could find that had normal and FP, I was gonna use this one (Light Charmer Alternate) for the Normal Charmer until I found these two, Eh, I'll post that one up as well XD. Aonon:Thanks. tha pic is preety good I think you should use it!!!! lol, If I did for Lhii she wouldn't have a FP form XD, That's why I made and posted up Ligero. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Thanks' date=' Maybe I should make more cards as Balanced as I can XD.[/quote'] But aren't these like the real charmers? EDIT: I checked the effect of Aussa the Earth Charmer: FLIP: Take control of 1 EARTH monster on your opponent's side of the field for as long as this card remains face-up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Thanks' date=' Maybe I should make more cards as Balanced as I can XD.[/quote'] But aren't these like the real charmers? lol, True, I should've put "Maybe I should make the OCG as real as possible then XD" or something, Instead of the Balance thing...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Thanks' date=' Maybe I should make more cards as Balanced as I can XD.[/quote'] But aren't these like the real charmers? lol, True, I should've put "Maybe I should make the OCG as real as possible then XD" or something, Instead of the Balance thing...... Yeah, you can't get much closer than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon95702 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 wow i never knew their was anyone on yugioh card maker that liked charmers,their great cards, (depending on what type deck). personally I'd like to see more:) keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfbat Master Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 with charmers the charmers normally have a pet that is a real card with them. Other than that 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 First, I'll correct OCG errors.Lhii the Light Charmer and Ligero the Light Charmer: FLIP: Take control of 1 LIGHT-Attribute monster your opponent controls, while this card remains face-up on the field.(OCG corrections taken straight from Dharc the Dark Charmer. This is in most current OCG) Familiar Possessed - Lhii: By sending 1 "Lhii the Light Charmer" and 1 LIGHT monster you control to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck. If you Special Summon this card in this way, it gets the following effect: When this card attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.(some of these corrections are uncertain, but it would seem natural to cut down on the words needed to convey the message of the effect) As for the pics, they're pretty nice, but they don't appear to have proper backgrounds i.e. the BGs are a little bland (except for Ligero's; that one seems fine enough to me). I know that you don't have much control over that, but I just had to mention that. Now, a word on the concept here. I know you weren't trying to make a monster with an original effect here, but if this kind of stuff is all you do, you probably won't survive here. I won't take off points for lack of originality here, but if you are to survive these boards, you're gonna have to start coming up with original and interesting effects. When you just continue an archetype for which there is only one effect type, it just becomes bland. (But I'm glad to hear that her adult form will be a Synchro; that idea is quite original) Bottom line: 9/10 as a Charmer, but watch out for originality with future cards.Nice cards. 9/10 Thanks' date=' Maybe I should make more cards as Balanced as I can XD.[/quote'] But aren't these like the real charmers? EDIT: I checked the effect of Aussa the Earth Charmer: FLIP: Take control of 1 EARTH monster on your opponent's side of the field for as long as this card remains face-up on the field.Aussa is from a set in which older OCG was used. The most current Charmer is Dharc, which was released in The Duelist Genesis. Thus, she has the most current OCG, and is the most reliable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 First' date=' I'll correct OCG errors.Lhii the Light Charmer and Ligero the Light Charmer: [i']FLIP: Take control of 1 LIGHT-Attribute monster your opponent controls, while this card remains face-up on the field.[/i](OCG corrections taken straight from Dharc the Dark Charmer. This is in most current OCG) Familiar Possessed - Lhii: By sending 1 "Lhii the Light Charmer" and 1 LIGHT monster you control to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck. If you Special Summon this card in this way, it gets the following effect: When this card attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.(some of these corrections are uncertain, but it would seem natural to cut down on the words needed to convey the message of the effect) As for the pics, they're pretty nice, but they don't appear to have proper backgrounds i.e. the BGs are a little bland (except for Ligero's; that one seems fine enough to me). I know that you don't have much control over that, but I just had to mention that. Now, a word on the concept here. I know you weren't trying to make a monster with an original effect here, but if this kind of stuff is all you do, you probably won't survive here. I won't take off points for lack of originality here, but if you are to survive these boards, you're gonna have to start coming up with original and interesting effects. When you just continue an archetype for which there is only one effect type, it just becomes bland. (But I'm glad to hear that her adult form will be a Synchro; that idea is quite original) Bottom line: 9/10 as a Charmer, but watch out for originality with future cards. lol, I know it ain't that original, But once I found the pics I had to make them XD, And besides the Future Synchro form, I plan on making a Fusion of the 4 original Charmers eventually, It's just a matter of finding the right Picture... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 lol Ligero means "Fast" in portuguese i'am from brazil XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 lol Ligero means "Fast" in portuguese i'am from brazil XD I guess is makes sense; light is pretty darn fast. (btw that's an understatement) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 The Fusion was made and posted in 10 Minutes XD, I was deciding weather to use that image or This one, But I used the current one since This one don't have a 'Familiar' around.....then again the one I chose doesn't have a wand.......darn it the right images are hard to find XD, I'll change it when I find a better one....... NOTE: I did NOT copy the image of the card in Aonon's Signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice fusion card. BTW, shouldn't it be opponent's?Oh, should add a rating fr the fusion. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 lol, Eh, I guess it can be opponent's or opponents XD, They seemed to similar to me XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.F.Yuji Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Bump, Added Charmers Guardian monster card, And 3 Spells, Charmers Unite, Charmers Sanctuary*, & Charmer's Guidance. *You can see a building in the Background so you could say it's the Charmers 'Home' so to speak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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