GundamFreedom Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 I remaking this thread with the new edits of the cards including new cards. I kinda mispelled a word in this card's effect. Also the effect is kinda messed up. The effect should say:"By discarding one card from your hand, you can negate only one monster attack from the oppenent side of the field." Another one that I forgot to change its effect. It should say:"You can scarifice(sorry for the mispelling) this card to negate a trap or spell card that can destory a monster card." This cannot be summon, tribute, summon, or set onto the field. This cannot be special summon except by sending any one card of "Thunder Zerker" or "Dark Thunder Zerker". When it is special summoned successfully, destory 2 cards on the field and inflect 200 life points to your oppenent's life points. I will post up the new edits tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 the cards that say "special summon this card from your hand or deck" is OPed. to special summon a card just because mega man is on the field would turn into a instant OTK. pics need some backgrounds. i'm happy to see that you gave your mega man(a normal) some support. these can def be great cards. put some work into 'em. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregran Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 the cards that say "special summon this card from your hand or deck" is OPed. to special summon a card just because mega man is on the field would turn into a instant OTK. pics need some backgrounds. i'm happy to see that you gave your mega man(a normal) some support. these can def be great cards. put some work into 'em. 6.5/10 thats all that's needed said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 I'd say a good way to reduce the OP aspect of these cards would to give it a Gladiator Beast spin (if you control Megaman, you can Trib him to Summon the Style Change, and can rotate between them via battle or in Main Phase), but that's just my view on things. Now for some looks at the individual cards. "Megaman": No gripes here; decent vanilla, with some support on the way -- I can't complain about that, seeing as that's what I've been touting about for some time. "Megaman: Aqua Custom Style": Squashed image, my recommendation for that would be image cropping (you can do without part of his feet, really, considering the action is knees up in this image), the 'dual typing' should be handled in its effect ("This card is also treated as Aqua-Type"), and like I said it should need to Tribute ickle Hub to Summon itself; also, an additional effect (perhaps a Draw effect a la Parshath?) is in order, considering that beyond being an easy beatstick this guy wouldn't appeal to me at all. "Megaman: Bass Soul": AKA Forte Cross Megaman. Interestingly enough . . . despite the 'Levia-Dragon Nuking' it doesn't seem TERRIBLY broken barring the fact that it should require at least ONE Tribute to Summon. Also, I hope you meant to make it so that that effect only activates when he's Summoned or Tribute Summoned or something, otherwise a guy could just pull a Terror Incarnate on us all using this. "Bass": Kudos for using the Duel Masters card image (yes, Duel Masters made a Forte card; was he a Dark Lord? I forget), though I think you could do well with trying to find an image that does NOT have 'Bass Cross' in underlined text at the bottom (Rockman.EXE Online might have one in their image gallery, if it's still up and running). As for the effect . . . To quote a Mr. 'E-Mouse' I know on another forum: "Ahaha. Oh, wow." From what you've made, I could have a monster with over 5000 ATK on the turn he's summoned; either make it so that it needs to be from your hand, that you can only do it once per turn, that it only lasts the turn, or some combination of two or all of the three -- otherwise this Bass might as well be Bass GS, because he's going to be equally frustrating. "Megaman: Bug Style": Once again, the dual-typing should be in the effect, unless you intend to make cards of the various Viruses of MMBN -- in which case it should be a Sub-Type (refer to the Tutorials section on how to make a unique Sub-Type in your cards), and as for the effect . . . 3800 ATK AND SUMMONABLE IN ONE TURN. There is a problem there. Also, you don't need to put 'When this card is in your hand', because most cards that are Special Summon only (or Special Summonable period; think 'Dark Necrofear') are from the hand only unless otherwise written on the card. Also, for future reference, when a card effect names another card, it is put in quotation marks "Like This". This is to separate the card names from the actual effect. "Megaman: Colonel Soul": Broken, broken, broken. "When successfully Summoned, destroy two cards on the field." While mandatory makes it a little less broken (sounds contrary, but consider if you will what happens when you get 3 Heads for Gatling Dragon while there's only 2 other cards on the field), it's still a broken effect -- just by Summoning it in any way I wish I get to kill 2 cards willy-nilly, something most Warrior Decks would KILL for. "Megaman: Elec Ground Style": Again, need to put a restriction on how it's Summoned, put the dual-typing in the effect as mentioned in my review of Aqua Custom Style, and it deserves an effect -- perhaps something to do with Fields? "Megaman: Heat Guts Style": Once more for the win, restrict its Summoning by way of either cost of Megaman or Summoning Conditions, put the dual-typing in your effect, and it deserves an effect -- perhaps one dealing with card destruction or that would pump its ATK higher than Aqua Custom, considering that it's Heat Guts that's supposed to be the super-ATK monster in my view (it gives a free Attack+1 effect for your Buster -- of course it's going to be ATK-based). "Megaman: Proto Soul": Once more it's dangerously broken. Either make it so that it can negate up to 2 attacks against itself, or give the negation a cost. Also, try to find a less-pixellated image -- cropping works wonders, and might make the image more dynamic. "Megaman: Wind Shield Style": AUGH. WOOD SHIELD WOOD SHIELD WOOD SHIELD!!! Sure, the Charged Shot is a Tornado, but the style is WOOD. And 'Wind' is not a type, Fairy or Winged-Beast is, though you're better off giving it a dual-typing as instructed previous (i.e., in the effect) and it's recommended by moi that it be Plant. Otherwise, same recommendations as with the other Style Changes, though you might want to give it something along the lines of Cyber Barrier Dragon to keep in with theme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Why write MegaMan, when its actually MegaMan Net Battle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Why write MegaMan' date=' when its actually MegaMan Net Battle?[/quote'] Not quite. The video game series is 'Megaman Battle Network', but as with many Megaman games the fandom shortens the name to MMBN; as for Megaman, that's his actual alias (minus file extension; as to why I say 'alias', the answer to why would be spoilerific and so I'd rather not say it). And besides, there's more than one Megaman series (Megaman [MMC, C = Classic], Megaman X [MMX], Megaman Legends [MML], Megaman Battle Network [MMBN], Megaman Zero [MMZ], Megaman ZX [MMZX], and Megaman Star Force [MMSF]), with 'Megaman' being able to be used as a term for the collective series' as a whole (believe it or not, they CAN be strung together, wtih the exceptions of MMBN, MMSF, and MML, into one timeline; meanwhile, MMBN and MMSF are part of their own timeline, and MML used to fit in after MMX, and later after MMZ [but then ZX came along]). But that's just me rambling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Some pics needs background while some are really blurry. I like the effort though^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Why write MegaMan' date=' when its actually MegaMan Net Battle?[/quote'] Not quite. The video game series is 'Megaman Battle Network', but as with many Megaman games the fandom shortens the name to MMBN; as for Megaman, that's his actual alias (minus file extension; as to why I say 'alias', the answer to why would be spoilerific and so I'd rather not say it). And besides, there's more than one Megaman series (Megaman [MMC, C = Classic], Megaman X [MMX], Megaman Legends [MML], Megaman Battle Network [MMBN], Megaman Zero [MMZ], Megaman ZX [MMZX], and Megaman Star Force [MMSF]), with 'Megaman' being able to be used as a term for the collective series' as a whole (believe it or not, they CAN be strung together, wtih the exceptions of MMBN, MMSF, and MML, into one timeline; meanwhile, MMBN and MMSF are part of their own timeline, and MML used to fit in after MMX, and later after MMZ [but then ZX came along]). But that's just me rambling. I know, but the name of the card should still be MegaMan .NET. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Hearts™ Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Pics are blurry... some at least lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GundamFreedom Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 ok ill try to fix them if i can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 I know' date=' but the name of the card should still be MegaMan .NET.[/quote'] You mean MegaMan.EXE (Or, if you prefer the original Japanese name, Rockman.EXE) -- NetNavis are programs, not websites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiMario Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 I know' date=' but the name of the card should still be MegaMan .NET.[/quote'] You mean MegaMan.EXE (Or, if you prefer the original Japanese name, Rockman.EXE) -- NetNavis are programs, not websites. Oops, if forgot it was EXE, :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GundamFreedom Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 need some one to look at the new megaman to review it and guve me advice how to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 They're not bad. However, I do have some suggestions. First, there is no "Ultimate Dark" version of the OOPart Mega Men. If you recall, they are called Rouge forms, like Rouge Zerker, Rouge Saurian, or Rouge Ninja. The images do need a bit of cropping, like almost everyone said. There are better pics to. Google images has Black Ace and Red Joker images that are just the monster, without Shooting Star Rockman in the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GundamFreedom Posted June 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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