tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 alright, every one knows my first card, well now he's got a small family, I just put 3 more cards with him so, check em out, tell me if any thing's wrong with em, and just tell me what ya think This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set unless "Zombie World" is on the field, while "Zombie World" is in play you can Normal Summon this card in face-up Attack Position by Tributing 1 Zombie-type monster, every time this card destroys a Zombie-type monster Special Summon a "Howling Beast Token" (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. When this cards attacks destroy any number of "Howling Beast Token", this card gains 500 ATK for every "Howling Beast Token" destroyed by this effectWhen this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon up to 2 Zombie-type monsters with 2000 DEF or less from your hand or deck, this card cannot attack or be attacked if you control another Zombie-type monster This card can only be activated if there is a "Howler Of The Dead" on the field, Tribute 1 Level 7 or higher monster on your side of the field to Special Summon up to 4 "Howling Beast Tokens" (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position on your side of the field"Howler Of The Dead" + "King Of The Undead"This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing From Play the above Fusion Material monsters from your side of the field, every time this card destroys a Zombie-type monster Special Summon a "Howling Beast Token" (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position, as long as there is at least 1 "Howling Beast Token" this card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards, once per turn you can destroy a "Howling Beast Token" to destroy 1 face up Zombie-type monster on your opponents side of the field new member new cards ^^ tell me what you all think about em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vineco Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Write out its effect for us please. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 sorry for not putting the lore there, it could be hard to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vineco Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Well having the effect 'This card cannot be normal summoned or set unless zombie world is in play' with the effect. ' while zombie world is on the field You can special summon this card by Tributing 1 zombie-type monster ' is somewhat pointless seeing that you cant summon him without zombie world.And if it was for the purpose of it being a special summon instead of a regular summon for 1 tribute instead of 2 then you should have some drawback on the card for being able to special summon it with just 1 tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 I think it is for your first card ^_^I will fix OCG to the best of my ability This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set unless "Zombie World" is on the field, while "Zombie World" is in play you can Special Summon this card by sending 1 Zombie-type monster to the Graveyard, every time this card destroys a Zombie-type monster Summon a Howling Beast Token (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in defense position. When this cards attacks destroy any number of Howling Beast Tokens, this card gains 500 ATK for every Howling Beast Token destroyed by this effect I would rate 8/10 a really great card we should have a 1 on 1 sometime ^_^I can tell you worked hard on this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 hey thanks ^^, and yeah I worked fairly hard on it, I tried to reference as much of it's effect as I could but ...(epiphany)...grammatical writing's never been my best subject lol ^^, dose every one here know that our english teachers have all been lying to us, they don't have good gramer either, gramer is apparently not even a word O.o...go figure eh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Darkersheep Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 How do you post cards, I'm a noob, and the only reason i didnt go to the help section is because I knew I'd probably get help faster here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 all you have to do is save the picture, upload it to photobucket or something then get the img code ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Very nice, tensho okami, you've come up with an interesting effect (once again, not only am I beaten to the punch for OCG fix, but I'm treated to a unique effect -- that makes it a 1:3 bad:good ratio tonight, this is quite enjoyable). And as for the mention earlier about there needing to be a nerf -- the fact that it can only be Normal Summoned with Zombie World out is a nerf enough, though you might want to make it so that instead of Special Summoning it by Tributing one monster, you Normal Summon it by Tributing one monster -- i.e., like Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon (from the Zombie World structure deck, no less). I'm fairly pleased by this, keep up the good work, and keep doing a good job of referencing your effects as you write them. How do you post cards' date=' I'm a noob, and the only reason i didnt go to the help section is because I knew I'd probably get help faster here.[/quote'] And despite the fact that tensho okami already replied, I'm going to give a little extra. If you click on the card image you generated, a little bar will appear at the bottom with an IMG-tagged piece of text inside that you can paste into your posts to post up your card -- it does the uploading for you to do this, see. However, I seriously recommend you go to the TUTORIALS section on the board (it's in the help section as a sub-board, if I remember right) before doing this sort of thing in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 alright thanks, you do have a point about the special summon thing, I'll edit that ^^alright all fixed up ^^ thanks for your help guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Erm, you might want to reference Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon for your '1 Tribute Zombie Summoning': You can Tribute Summon this card in Attack Position by Tributing 1 Zombie-Type monster. You can eschew the 'attack position' (e.g., "You can Tribute Summon this card by Tributing 1 Zombie-Type monster.") if you choose -- however, this will still save you valuable card space. My advice to you would be to use the Yugioh Wiki (yugioh.wikia.com) to reference effects that you recall as being similar to those of others, or to reference effects for the sake of proper OCG; it's simple, easy, effective, and you'll undoubtedly get more ideas from the inevitable wiki-browsing that may ensue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 oh snap, I didn't even think about that, thanks, I'll fix it again, don't know how that slipped my mind Red Eyes any thing are my favorite cards and I've been playing allot with the Zombie Dragon here lately Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 :( my 3 new cards are so lonely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 These are getting better you should make more a lot more ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 thanks ^^ these were really just warm ups though, right now I'm working on a whole set, here's one of them right now, you can speculate on how things will go when you see it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swat171992 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 youz is gots a prettty mouth roflmao youz is gots some prettty nice kards heer you should put som of dem dar charzards in thar lmao well you should deffinatly try to make some more of them there charzards but other than that i really like you cards, seeing that i just saw them at your house like 30 min.s ago lmao hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah(evil)hahahahahahaahahahahahahaahahhahahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 I forgot to add the new rating 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 wicked wicked awesom ^^ thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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