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If this card is summoned successfully your opponent must discard 3 cards from their hand to the graveyard. Every monster sent to the graveyard from this effect increases the ATK and DEF or this card by 500 points.

 

Spelled graveyard wrong the second time you wrote it. You also spelled defense wrong and its probably better to write them like ATK and DEF instead.

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. . . I clicked this thread thinking 'Oh, god, what philistine trite is this newbie spewing across the board' . . . but then I saw something that defied what I expected. I had expected some second-rate hack of a Divine-Beast . . .

 

. . . But then I see this interestingly-enough well-thought-out card. I seem to have good luck today (so far it's been a 1:2 bad:good ratio today -- and you're the 2nd).

 

If this card is summoned successfully your opponent must discard 3 cards from their hand to the graveyard. Every monster sent to the graveyard from this effect increases the ATK and DEF or this card by 500 points.

 

I'd normally attempt an OCG fix, but vineco seems to have done a smashing job of it on their own; and yes, vineco, you're right -- it's proper OCG to use 'ATK' and 'DEF' instead of 'Attack' and 'Defense', except when referring to Battle Positions (in which you say 'Attack Position' or 'Defense Position', and if you have to have it face-up or face-down you put that in front of the position -- e.g. 'face-down Defense Position' or 'face-up Attack Position').

 

However, my review: Very nice, very nice, this card's effect is quite interesting, and it's not broken (interestingly/surprisingly enough). As I have said once before tonight, I look forward to seeing more good and unique cards from you.

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Correctly:

 

If this card is summoned successfully, your opponent must discard 3 cards from their hand to the graveyard. For every Monster sent to the Graveyard by this Card's Effect, this Card gains 500 ATK.

 

I think that this is a little broken. It can become an one-tribute 4000 ATK. No, that accuracy is low, but its ATK is 2500 to 4000. That means it is about 3250. Also, even one monster will make this Blue-Eyes.

 

PLUS!!

3 discards are a lot. Broken, but good. I think it should be ATK 2000 or something, and LV7.

7/10.

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