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Yugioh Zombies (New Concept+Duel Ghouls)


OrcMan321

Is it any good?  

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  1. 1. Is it any good?

    • Yes, like the first chapter.
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    • Yeah, needs some work though.
    • I like the concept, just not your version.
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    • No, just plain bad.
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    • Why would you do that?
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[/align][/color]I'm only trying this out with the first chapter, but if you like, i'll write more...

 

When walking down from school, pausing at the nearby shop to by some new booster packs. Nathan ran into the shop and bought the last of the Raging Battle booster packs. He quickly opened the packs and looked inside. He let out a weak smile and walked on. He noticed another man walking along. "Hey Paddy!" Nathan shouted as he waved towards the other.

Paddy waved back but contiued to walk on. "Guess he'll call back." Nathan returned home and placed his bag on the table, he then got a duel disk out and his deck. He then heard various screams coming from outside, Nathan ran outside to see three people doubled over. As the centre woman rose to her feet and turned around revealing a blank face with white, transparent eyes. All it could mutter out was "Duel me."

Nathan looked in horror towards the figure. Nathan slammed the door and grabbed his duel disk. He then locked the door and stood back, turning on his duel disk.

At that moment his frend Paddy knocked on the back door, just before Nathan could get there, another blank figure grabbed hold of him and threw him back. Paddy threw his duel disk into the air and activated it.

"I summon Vorse Raider... Duel me... Duel me..." the man stumbled around towards Paddy with his Vorse Raider.

Paddy drew a sixth card and added it to his hand, he then spoke with a soft, irish accent. "I special summon two copies of Gilasaurus, and since they were special summons, I tribute them to summon Ultimate Tyranno. Then I play Fissure, who destroys your Raider, then I play Axe of Despair. Who increases my Tyranno's attack by one thousand. He then attacks you directly. Meaning an one turn kill!" Unlike the other duels however, the opponant did not get back up. Paddy looked towards him and noticed a gapig big burn going through him. He looked up to see his Tyranno standing there. Paddy shook his head, Nathan then opened the door to let him in. Paddy locked the door behind him. Now they had to wonder how they were going to get other survivors.

 

 

[/color]Characters: Paddy 30d5627.png

Deck: Dino Beatdown

Nathan [align=center]9470716.png

Deck: Dragon

Chapter 2:

 

Nathan ran around the house, panicking and waving his arms in the air. Paddy sat down and asked if Charlie and Scott have come. Nathan shook his head and started to border up the windows and doors. Paddy flickered through the channels on the tele, trying to find out what was going on, however, he found no news on this as all the tv stations were blank. He then heard more duels going on outside along with screams and growls. Paddy shook his head and went to the window, helping Nathan board it up. Charlie and Scott were nearby as they were trying to get through to the police, Scott ruffled his bright green hair as he attempted to redial the emergency number, but to no avail. Charlie then realized that these 'Zombies' were also duelists. So she picked up the phone and attempted to call Nathans house. "Ohh no! there not picking up, do you think the zombies got'tem?"

Scott looked out of the window and said, "Don't say that, the Z word, don't say it."

Charlie looked puzzled and asked why, to which Scott replied, "Because it's ridiculous. Anyway they are there because Nathans waving his arms about by the back door. See." Scott pointed as he grabbedsome suplies, Charlie closely followed as they climbed into Nathans back garden. He banged on the door caustiously so noone could hear. Paddy saw them at the door and let them in. Afterwards, they all sat down on the sofas and tried listening to the radio, all they could get was warnings and telling people to border up inside, Nathan looked across the room and said "All we need to do is board up the back door and were done." As he said this Paddy's face turned pale as he thought "Ohh..."

Then as he turned his face to the door, another 'zombie stumbled in, with a growth coming from his chest which resembled a duel disk and one arm missing. "Korh Blimey, He's got an arm off!" Scott jumped up as he said this, and instinctly dump tackled the zombie into the garden.

He jumped back inside, grabbed his duel disk, and started to duel. Nathan then exclaimed, "I'm gonna goshut the gate!" as he hurried past with Paddy to chain up the gate. When they looked back they could see a smile on Scotts face as he started to duel the zombies.

 

 

More Characters:

 

Charlie: 0127185.png

Deck: Warrior

Scott: fb33370.png

Deck: Aliens

By the way, If you wanna submit a character or sub plot etc... Just PM me, btw even though it's Card Maker, the characters are using real decks.

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