LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 [align=center]Steel RhinoThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 1 face-up "Steel" monster you control. This card cannot be Special Summoned. Any Battle Damage you would receive from a battle involving this card becomes 0. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you must skip your next Battle Phase. This card cannot switch its Battle Position after it has destroyed a monster until your next End Phase.This cards ATK and DEF cannot be increased. [/align] [align=center]Steel Cards[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 [align=center]Img credit? Aside from that, it seems like a bunch of random effects in one card (sorry if I'm being a hippocryte)... but try to make it flow a little better. Good idea though 8/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 [align=center]Img credit? Aside from that' date=' it seems like a bunch of random effects in one card (sorry if I'm being a hippocryte)... but try to make it flow a little better. Good idea though 8/10[/color'][/align] I can't give image credit ;) And the effect isn't random, plan it out in a duel, you will see it's not random at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 This card is like throwing a rock into a pond and letting it sink. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 This card is like throwing a rock into a pond and letting it sink. Read its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 I did there are too many restrictions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 1) you dont take battle damage when you attack2) skip next battle phase after destroying monster3) switch battle pahse, (to prevent abusing its 3000 DEF)4) no ATK +DEF gain, so what, that would just be OP. I don't get what's wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 yeah mirage has a point, way to many drawbacks for a couple good effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 "Steel" support coming your way then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 This seems a little better >_> Maybe this So basically you have a sorta beat stickish type thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 How can you not make a card a beatstick, every time i make a card, you call it a beatstick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Well I do make beat sticks except you get a reward for doing it. For this card it attacks and can't do anything about anything else except take up space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Personally I think the pictures a bit iffy. That probably just me. Oh well, at least it isn't pixelated, ripped crap that some noobs occasionally spew out. Considering its just an idea, you did great! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Well I did say 'new card idea' - I was planning on doing a "Steel" Set, in which more cards would help each other, like preventing parts of the effects if used in certain ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Well I am criticizing the card itself. If you want my comment on the idea then fine. Well I see a lot of restrictions and not really useful effect due to those restrictions. All I can see this card to be used for is a giant wall with a useless ability. Maybe make the effects based more around defense then anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 I like your card^^good image ;-) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Meh K. And the image is custom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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