First Set: Spirit Set

[Matrigan]

Hey everyone, this is my first set. It's about Spirit monsters (not the type spirit, just called spirit) and its currently largely unfinished. Let's see what you think!

 

UPDATE 5/20/09: Minor OCG errors fixed. Titan Messenger has been powered down and changed from a Synchro to a Fusion Monster. The Spirit Messengers are no longer Tuners.

 

UPDATE 5/20/09: Titan Messenger- Tyvaan's name has been changed. 4 new cards have been added to the set.

 

 

Effect: By discarding two trap cards from your hand you may select one monster with "Spirit" in it's name from the graveyard and return it to your hand. During your Main Phase, you can discard one spell card from your hand to change all face-up cards on the field to defense position. You may discard one monster card from your hand to the graveyard to negate and destroy one Magic or Trap card that targets this monster.

 

 

Effect: This card gains 100 ATK and DEF points for every level of every monster in your graveyard combined. In addition, if this card is attacked while in defense position, by a monster who's attack is higher than the defense of this card, do not destroy this card, but calculate the difference between the attacking monster's attack and this card's defense, then double it, and subtract that number from your life points.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Effect: "Spirit Messanger- Alavan + "Spirit Messenger- Golbek" + " Spirit Messenger- Taaven"

When this card destroys another monster in battle, deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the level of that monster times 250. While this card is face-up on your side of the field you may send one monster card on your side of the field to the graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the sacrificed monster's level times 250. This card may not attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

 

 

Effect: You may switch this card from defense to attack position to negate the activation of a trap card that targets a monster on your side of the field with "Spirit" in it's name. This effect can only be used once every two turns. The position of this card cannot be changed for two turns after this effect is used. Any monster effect, Spell card or Trap card that attempts to change the position of this card within two turns after this effect is activated is negated and destroyed.

 

 

 

Effect: "Spirit Guardian- Armotek" + "Spirit Guardian- Gargaaven" + "Spirit Guardian- Halevenan"

While this card remains face-up on your side of the field you may sacrifice 600 Life Points to negate the effect of one Spell/ Trap/ Monster card that targets a monster on your sde of the field with "Spirit" in its name. Each time you do this put one "Guardian Counter" on this card. Once there are five "Guardian Counters" on this card, destroy it and inflict 1000 points of damage to both player's Life Points.

[The Fool]

You used The Lich King in your card art. gtfo.

 

also, cards are OP, especially Titan messenger, and level 4 tuners are pretty rarely found without negative effects.

 

OCG errors.

 

most card art is pretty nice, though.

 

5/10, work on it some.

[Lil Jevans]

You used The Lich King in your card art. gtfo.

 

It's just a pic. A lot of people (even me) have used it in cards. His choice of pic, not yours.

 

Anyway, onto the cards.

Some OCG errors but nothing too serious.

Pics are good.

Effects for most cards are alright.

As said, Level 4 tuners aren't seen too much and Titan messenger is way overpowered.

I quite like these cards. 7/10

[Matrigan]

I tried to limit OCG errors, and keep them to a minimum. It's hard to keep everything sounding so professional. If you could mention some of the more glaring ones that'd be great.

 

Edit: I'll consider fixing Titan Messenger. And for the other three level 4 tuners, I've never used a tuner monster in real life and just heard about them recently, since I've been "out of yu-gi-oh" for a few years. So I'll look around and consider ways to give them negative effects.

[Lil Jevans]

Like I said, nothing too serious. Just a few things that you don't need to say etc.

Hey, everyone makes them.

1st card:

bring it back to your hand - return it to your hand

2nd card:

attack and defense - ATK and DEF

3rd card:

opponents - opponent's

attack - ATK

battle phase - Battle Phase

end phase - End Phase

4th card:

opponents - opponent's

in battle - by battle

life points - Life Points

 

Nearly all other OCG problems are the ones above.

[Matrigan]

Ok I've updated almost all the cards so far, so future viewers, some of the above posts might not make complete sense. I'm keeping a log of my updates at the top of the original post. And thank you very much Lil Jevans.

[Guest JoshIcy]

Restless Spirit is the only one that sticks out.

Aside from the way it gains its stats, I really like it.

[tensho okami]

pretty nice cards, love the way you used the lich kings pic man, lol reminds me of ozzy "there can only be one prince of darkness" "SHARROOOOONNNNN!!!" lol XD, any way, nice cards 8/10 ^^

[Matrigan]

I've updated this again, adding 4 new cards to the mix.

[WTF]

i agree with icy

[Matrigan]

Bump.