Exa Raiun Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 This monster cannot be Special Summoned. If your opponent controls exactly 1 monster when this monster is Summoned, the original ATK of this card becomes 2000. If your opponent controls no monsters, the original ATK of this monster becomes 0. If your opponent control a Level 5 or Level 6 monster, the original ATK of this monster becomes 2200. If your opponent controls a Level 7 or higher monster, the original ATK of this card becomes 3000. [align=center]This monster is also treated as Dragon-Type. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this monster is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Dragon-Type monster, the original ATK of this monster becomes 2600. If this monster is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Warrior-Type monster, increase the ATK of this monster by 1000 when this card battles a Fiend- or Dragon-Type monster. When this monster is destroyed by battle, draw 1 card.[/align] This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, increase the ATK of this monster by 500 during the Damage Step only. You can activate the effect of this card only if you control at least 1 DARK Spellcaster-Type monsters, if you don't, destroy this card. As long as this card is on the field, each time when a DARK Spellcaster-Type monster you control is attacked, both players roll a dice. Increase the result of your roll by 1 if your opponent controls at least 1 LIGHT monster. If the result of your roll is equal or higher than the roll of your opponent, negate the attack. If you control 2 or more DARK monsters, this monster can be Summoned without Tributes. If you control no DARK monsters (except this card), destroy this monster. When this card destroys a monster by battle, increase your Life Points by 300 and inflict 300 damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Direct Damage, you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon a Level 8 or lower DARK monster from your hand by paying 1200 Life Points. Each time a Spellcaster-Type monster is Summoned, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 2). You can remove 2 Spell Counters from this card to switch the original ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster you control until your next Standby Phase. After 2 turns have passed after you Summoned this monster, you can Tribute this card to halve the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls until your next Standby Phase. Each time the position of a monster your opponent controls is switched, place 1 Awakening Counter on this card (max. 5). You can remove 1 Awakening Counter from this card to increase your Life Points by 500. You can remove 2 Awakening Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower WATER monster from your hand. You can remove 3 Awakening Counters from this card to draw 1 card. You can remove 4 Awakening Counters from this card to double the ATK of this card until your next Standby Phase. You can remove 5 Awakening Counters from this card to destroy all Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls. [align=center]1 Fairy-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monstersThis card is also treated as Fairy-Type. When this monster is Synchro Summoned, you can discard 1 card from your hand and declare 1 Type of monster. Destroy all face-up monsters of the declared Type on the field. This monster can be destroyed only by battle. When this monster is destroyed, inflict 600 damage to both players.[/align] [align=center]The Attribute of this card is also treated as DARK. When this monster is Summoned, inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Spell or Trap Card on the field. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each FIRE and DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this monster is destroyed by battle, you can place this card in the Field Spell Card Zone with the following effect:- Increase the ATK and DEF of FIRE and DARK monsters by 400. Each time when a FIRE or DARK monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can remove from play 3 FIRE or DARK monsters from your Graveyard to destroy the attacking monster.[/align] This card is also treated as Pyro-Type. When this monster destroys a monster by battle, increase the ATK of this card by 200 and inflict 200 damage to your opponent. When this monster inflicts Direct Damage, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower FIRE monster from your hand or Deck. When this monster is Summoned, and during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Fire Beast Token" (Beast-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 1200/DEF 800). Increase the ATK of this card by 250 for each Beast-Type monster you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control to inflict 800 damage to your opponent. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during this turn. [align=center]When this monster is used for a Synchro Summon, select 1 Level 3 or lower non-Tuner monster you control or Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower non-Tuner monster from your hand. The selected or Summoned monster is treated as a Tuner monster.[/align] Equip this card only to a LIGHT or DARK Fairy-Type monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 800. The equipped monster is unaffected by the effects of Warrior- and Spellcaster-Type monsters your opponent controls. Activate the effect of this card only if a Fairy-Type monster you control is attacked. Negate the attack and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the attacked monster x300. If the Effect Damage is 2100 or higher, the opponent discards randomly 1 card from his/her hand. When the effect of this card is activated, you can Special Summon 1 "Angel Maiden Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) and 1 "Demon Maiden Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500). These Tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon. As long as this card is on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of LIGHT Fairy-Type and DARK Fiend-Type monsters by 500. Once per turn when you would take Effect Damage, increase your Life Points by the same amount instead. Once per turn, when your opponent would gain Life Points, inflict the same amount of damage to your opponent instead. [align=center]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by discarding 1 Equip Spell Card from your hand. When this monster is destroyed by battle, add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.[/align] As long as this card is on the field, each time when monsters with the same Type are battling, increase the ATK of the monster you control by 500 during the Damage Step only. When this monster is Tribute Summoned, increase your Life Points by 200 for each Thunder-Type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Graveyard to decrease the ATK and DEF of 1 monster your opponent controls by the Level of the removed monster x 100. The first image is from the Prism Ark anime, the others are from danbooru. Opinions, comments, constructive ideas are welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 not badz at all :D its simple and effective 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Meh,pic is bad,effect is not that far from simple. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 well the pic is really bad but i liked the originalty on the effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Well, I have to admit that when I saw that pic, it inspired me to make a card - it's not a very good pic, I know. Because I currently have no ideas for full concepts, I'll most probably make random cards with various degree of complexity. This one is a simpler one, but oh well. Thanks for the comments, anyway! :) On an other note, I added another card, Enthusiastic Axefighter, a Warrior whose ATK is heavily based on the monsters your opponent controls. The more powerful her opponents are, the better she is doing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Bump, 1 card - Dragonrider of Dark Hope - added. A Warrior-Type who is also treated as a Dragon-Type, and she works the best in a Dragon- or Warrior-deck, because of her effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakesh Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 The pic is bad.I like the effect.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Can I ask which card are you referring from the three? Or all of them? Sorry if the pictures are not the best in quality - what is the problem with them, exactly? - but I have to admit if I find a picture which inspires me to make card - especially if I have an idea for a good effect, too - the quality of the picture is somewhat lower on my priority list, compared to the creativity of the effect and balance. Oh, and added one more card - Lancer of the Mountain Path is a direct attacker, but can defend herself in combat quite well, unlike most of the direct attackers. I hope it doesn't go to the cost of balance ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vineco Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 I like lance related people. Good going. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Thank you ^^ I try to do my best with making creative, balanced cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 great pics i like this ~! the best ~!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 New card added - Nocturnal Illusion. This one is a Continuous Spell to support DARK Spellcaster-Type monsters by protecting them with dark illusions. Some luck is involved in that card, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Some random person that can't make good enough card.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
midnight_blue Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Pics are acceptable. Effects are nice. 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Some random person that can't make good enough card.3/10 Khm... could you explain that rating? What is your problem with it? OCG? Balance issues? Or what? Pics are acceptable. Effects are nice. 8/10 :) Thank you! Indeed, I put effects and balance in my first priority ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 good cards7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 umm. ocg and op Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Ocg errors? Where? It's possible, but if you tell it, I'll gladly change them. OP? I don't think so... or is there some combo possiblity I didn't notice? I doubt it.The effect of Champion of the Arena requires a good timing, and considering it cannot be Special Summoned, it's not that easy. Not to mention there is a 2000 ATK Normal Monster already in the game.Enthusiastic Axefighter is an interesting case. While against high level monsters, she can be very powerful, but if your opponent doesn't have high level monsters on the field, she can be outclassed.Dragonrider of Dark Hope works the best in a Dragon or Warrior deck, obviously. Her effective work she needs to be Tribute Summoned by a specific type, so I believe it's not so bad in terms of balance.Lancer of the Mountain Path is just a somewhat more durable Direct Attacker.Nocturnal Illusion is a somewhat luck-based card, and its requirement to keep it on the field makes it somewhat vulnerable. So? Do you accept this explanation as a proof that they are not overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Dragon Rider of Dark Hope is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 You are not a person of many words, right? But ok, let's see her again:A Warrior-Type who is also treated as Dragon-Type. She inflicts Piercing Damage. If you used a Dragon-Type as a tribute, her ATK becomes 2600 ~ just like Frostosaurus. If you used a Warrior-Type, she will have 3100 ATK against against Fiend- and Dragon-Type - great against that two specific Types, but not that good against others. And if its destroyed by battle, you can draw a card. Is it really that overpowered? Which part of that you have problems? The ATK boost? The card draw? Because she needs specific conditions to work the best, I don't believe that's that bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Very good 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moldfire Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Not bad9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Some random person that can't make good enough card.3/10 I'd expect you to do worser >_> Good cards, solid OCG by the looks of it.A few may be overpowered, but still these cards are great.Pics are alright, good concept, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Thanks for all the comments! Well, I try to make creative, unique cards, and because of that, sometimes minor balance problems may occur, but I do my best to avoid these mistakes! ^^ I also added one more card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick8478 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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