fish-eye Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Smash Bros. Brawl is one of my fave games. i know others have done SSBB sets but i wanna get my ideas out there. i hope to make this a big set,(in time) so plz bear with me. any OCG help and such will be appreciated. [spoiler=Final Smash cards] [spoiler=image credit]google/photo bucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmilyAnnCoons Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Looks pretty cool. No OCG errors that I can see, and the images are good ^^ The only thing I question is why you lose Life Points equal to Peach's DEF when she dies? That doesn't make sense to me, but otherwise, it looks good -nods- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 On mario's card: Replace the is with inpeach's card: Instead of apply damage calculation normally, its Damage calculation is applied normally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Looks pretty cool. No OCG errors that I can see' date=' and the images are good ^^ The only thing I question is why you lose Life Points equal to Peach's DEF when she dies? That doesn't make sense to me, but otherwise, it looks good -nods-[/quote'] i put in the drawback for peach because of her effect. should i loose the drawback? @ Hawkeye: thank you for the OCG correction.(peach and mario OCG fixed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Mm Nice cards, 7/10But, Wouldn't Image Credit goto:Sora, Nintendo & Masahiro Sakurai? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Mm Nice cards' date=' 7/10But, Wouldn't Image Credit goto:Sora, Nintendo & Masahiro Sakurai?[/quote'] sorry i did'nt think we had to go that far for image credit. i got those pics using Google and DeviantArt like i always do. sorry if i offened anyone. thanks for the rating. there will be more cards in time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Mm Nice cards' date=' 7/10But, Wouldn't Image Credit goto:Sora, Nintendo & Masahiro Sakurai?[/quote'] sorry i did'nt think we had to go that far for image credit. i got those pics using Google and DeviantArt like i always do. sorry if i offened anyone. thanks for the rating. there will be more cards in time. Lol, You offending no one =pHope to see more cards ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Lol' date=' Your offending no one =pHope to see more cards ^^[/quote'] oh... ok you made me think there was something totaly wrong. i fully respect Nintendo and the team that put SSBB together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Some OCG errors The fixed effect of Peach: If this card is selected as an attack target, Flip a coin ●If Heads, the attack is negate ●If Tails, this card is sent to the Graveyard and you lose 800 Life Points. (Damage Calculation normally applied.) BTW the bullets wont work, so use hyphens(-). 6/10. Make sure you fix the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Some OCG errors The fixed effect of Peach: If this card is selected as an attack target' date=' Flip a coin ●If Heads, the attack is negate ●If Tails, this card is sent to the Graveyard and you lose 800 Life Points. (Damage Calculation normally applied.) BTW the bullets wont work, so use hyphens(-). 6/10. Make sure you fix the effect[/quote'] i don't like how the "(-)" looks on the card. and would prob be told to remove them. the last part about damage calculation is already correct. i'll change the wording of peach but imageshack is'nt uploading the image code right now. thank you for your input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakesh Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Nice cards.I can`t see any OCG errors.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 jeez assasin hero make your sig smaller xP ok picsno ocg errorsbecause the effect is effortlesssorry.what do you guys mean no ocg errorsprincess peachgraveyard = Graveyardequil = equalloose = decreasereword your cards better and stop putting full stops in everywheresorry if the comment seemed harsh ~ Shonen Jump™ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 jeez assasin hero make your sig smaller xP ok picsno ocg errorsbecause the effect is effortlesssorry.what do you guys mean no ocg errorsprincess peachgraveyard = Graveyardequil = equalloose = decreasereword your cards better and stop putting full stops in everywheresorry if the comment seemed harsh ~ Shonen Jump™ thanks for all the corrections. i'v made lots of cards with long card effects. i'm trying something different. i made these cards simple. sorry if i did'nt make a level 8 mario with a mile long effect. i want to balence these out so that i can make support cards that won't make these OPed. i'll have to update peach's effect. thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Are you gonna make more? Or just stay with these 2 cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Are you gonna make more? Or just stay with these 2 cards? yes. i plan to make this into a complete set. i just want to take my time and get things right. i will make 2 new cards on my days off.(about 4 per week) that gives me feedback from the members of YCM. i'm useualy busy with work and other things. so my day off is a perfect time to make cards. i offen post 10-15 cards at a time and its hard for members to give me OCG help and rate my cards cause theres so many. i hope you all can bear with me. i am and will put much effort into this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Okay. That's good to hear^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solidsnake1209 Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I dont want a level 8 mario with a mile long effect level 5 - 6 mario's with mild balanced effects always make the cut for me =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I dont want a level 8 mario with a mile long effect level 5 - 6 mario's with mild balanced effects always make the cut for me =P i plan on making item and field cards that will support the characters. so thats why most will be lower levels. the level 5 - 6 monsters will prob be Ganon, R.O.B., etc... and i don't think i'll make any 7 - 8 level characters.(maybe giga bowser and super wario) i'm happy to see that you guys/ladys want more and are showing support. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Yoshi: dice=die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 You made.. WeeGee.. you are almost among Gods XD!Ha ha! =DOk, on a more serious note!Great to see more cards =]Keep going with this set!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrooboid313 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Well that's not very nice: Mario gets stronger when Peach dies. (lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Well that's not very nice: Mario gets stronger when Peach dies. (lol) Yeah! he has to save his princess. he gets power when she is in danger... like being in a graveyard. (lol) thanks ShadeZero. i'll def keep this going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 the second time you did monster in Bowser's effect you spelt it wrong.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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