TwistedFlameApe Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Okay, these are my new cards and ive been told that they came out pretty good. I dont take anything very hard so i want real critisism on how to make them better. Also, any ideas for more cards i could add to the set would be appreciated, you'll get credit for the card idea as well. Anywayz, hope ya like. plz comment. [spoiler=Text]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Destiny Hero" monsters. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's field and sends it to the Graveyard, put 1 Demise Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Demise Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) for each Demise Counter that was on this card in Defense Position to your field. [spoiler=Text]If this card is added to your hand by the effect of a card, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position on the field. If this card is Special Summoned successfully, add up to 2 DARK monsters from your Deck to your hand. [spoiler=Text]The original ATK of this card becomes the number of Demise Tokens on the field times 1000. Each time a Demise Token is removed from the field put 1 Destruction Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is removed from the field destroy cards on the field equal to the amount of Destruction Counters on this card. [spoiler=Text]The original DEF of this card becomes the number of Demise Tokens on the field times 1000. Each time a Demise Token is removed from the field put 1 Discard Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is removed from the field both players discard cards from their Hand equal to the amount of Discard Counters on this card. [spoiler=Text]If this card is targetted by an Equip Spell Card, destroy this card and send it to the Graveyard. If "Destiny Hero Demise Knight" is on your side of the field, halve the ATK of this card. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, distribute all types of Counters among all cards that can take them until they are at max. [spoiler=Text]Increase the ATK of all DARK Warrior-Type monsters on the field by 500 points. Each time a DARK Warrior-Type monster inflicts direct damage the controller of that card may send 1 card from his/her hand to the Graveyard in order to Special Summon 1 "Destiny Hero" to the field in face-up Attack Position. [spoiler=Text]This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponent's Spell or Trap cards. Each time a monster on the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Demise Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in attack position to the respective player's field. [spoiler=Text]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Demise Tokens" on your field cannot be destroyed by battle or change battle positions. [spoiler=Text]Activate only when there is at least 1 "Demise Token" on the field. Destroy all "Demise Tokens" on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Demise Tokens" destroyed by this card's effect x200. If 5 "Demise Tokens" are destroyed by this card's effect, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300. I JUST made this 1 like 2 mins ago so im gonna add it in here. [spoiler=Text]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by destroying 5 monsters on your field. You cannot Summon during the turn this card is Special Summoned. Pay 2000 Lifepoints during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, remove this card from play. Remove monsters from your Graveyard from play in order to activate the following effects:- 3 monsters: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field.- 5 monsters: Destroy all cards on the field except this card.- 7 monsters: Destroy all cards on your opponent's field.- 9 monsters: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined ATK of all monsters in his/her Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xyz_ember Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 i wouldn't 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 i wouldn't 6/10 The above review is utter crap. These cards have brilliant OCG, pics I would happily use and they would work well in a real D-Hero Deck. The only reason xyz_ember rated them so low is because he probably can't understand the effects. 9.2/10 for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 I'd appreciate it if no1 else simply gives me a rating. I'd like to know what i did wrong to do better next time. Thanks =) thanks Alf =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Capitalize "Spell" and "Trap". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 all fixed. cant believe i missed that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Not bad! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Isn't Tributing, Releasing?Cause I see alotta people use that OCG but yeah. 10/10 nice pics, nice effects, love discard devil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 -i love smartiesthanks =). umm im not sure about the whole releasing thing honestly b/c i dont use synchros, i run a dark gaia deck, but ill look into it sooner or later to get the correct OCG down. btw, u have my permission to use Discard Devil in any card contest or anything if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 hmmmm........8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 thanks for the ratings =) im glad something i made actually came out well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDisasterPokemon10 Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 javascript:uploadtoimageshack(); i know this is random, but can i get ur opinion on my 1st card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 plz dont post anything on this thread that doesnt have anythign to do with my cards. thats spamming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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