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I started to feel that making cards is fun. I bet this thread will be some update often. Pls give some comment and suggestion. I hope my cards didt disappoint you all.

 

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Effect : This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Descent Of The Thunder God" Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may send every face-up Normal Monster to the Graveyard. This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the combined ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on your side of the field.

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any suggestion and comment will be consider. feel free to post ur comment.:P

 

changed some error

changed some effect and some errors. Balanced out a bit. Pic changed.

Zeus effects changed abit. tq for all the suggestion. tried a new field card. but the name seems funny.

added some new cards.

 

i dun own these pics. these pics are belong to their original artist which i dun recognize at all xD. feel free to pm me if you feel that i stole your pic. I will remove the pic

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I'll admit this is a good attempt and idea from a new member, so well done! I'll attempt to point out the biggest OCG errors:

 

1. Change the Attribute to Light, instead of Divine (No-one takes Divine Monsters seriously here).

2. Change the type from Divine-Beast to Thunder. (Same reason)

3. Since it's a Ritual Monster, post up the Ritual Spell Card and the Tribute Fodder (Hades and Poseidon).

4. Crop the picture (in Paint or something) so there's less background and writing in the picture.

5. OCG: "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Wrath of The Gods" (slight name change as it sounds better). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may send every face-up Normal Monster to the Graveyard. This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the combined ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on your side of the field (slight change as it makes it less complicated)."

 

That should do it for the major OCG errors. Make the changes and you're getting a 9/10 from me!

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To go on from what I said before, you don't need to write "...by tributing Hades and Poseidon..." because that's what you've already done with the Ritual Spell Card.

The OCG is mostly alright apart from the last sentence:

"If there are no monsters on the field except this card, this card is destroyed."

 

Change the two things here, and this card will be sweet!

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Zeus effects changed abit. tq for all the suggestion. tried a new field card. but the name seems funny.

 

i tried to change to atk and def to 1 "?" instead of 4". but the results seems weird. so i keep with the old ones.

 

thx for all the suggestion you all gave. about the ritual summon card, im still stuck with the pic. so pls be patient. i will upload it as soon as i got the suitable pic.

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If you need ideas, here's a couple:

 

Hades: When summoned, Special Summon as many cards from either player's Graveyard as possible (ignoring Summoning requirements).

 

Poseidon: When summoned, send all non-WATER monsters on the field to the Graveyard.

 

These are just my ideas. Use them or leave them.

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erm... isn't it abit overpowered? how about this

 

Hades : This card can only be special summon by removing from play 3 dark attribute monster from your graveyard. when this card is summoned successfully, u can summon up to 3 6-star monster from your graveyard. pay 500 life point for each monster you summoned by the effect of this card. pay 500 life point each time you declare an attack with this card. when this card is destroyed, the monster summoned using the effect of this card is destroyed.

ATK : 2600 DEF : 2200

 

Poseidon : This card can only be tribute summoned when Umi is on the field. When this card is summoned successfully, send all water attribute monster to the graveyard except this card. for each water attribute monster send to the graveyard, this card gained 200 atk.

Atk : 2000 DEF : 2200 (6-star monster)

 

 

and how about my 2nd card?

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These are still very good. I just have a few suggestions:

 

Freya:

i) Change the effect to: "Select 1 "Zeus...", "Hades..." or "Poseidon..." on your side of the field. While this card remains face-up on the field, you may negate the effect of any Spell or Trap cards that designate the selected monster. Pay 1000 Life Points to keep this card face-up during your Standby Phase."

ii) You may also want to change it from a Field Spell Card to a Continuous Spell Card.

 

Hades:

i) Change name to "Hades, God of The Dead"

ii) "This card can only be Tribute Summoned while "Castle of The Netherworld" is face-up on the field. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Level 6 monster from your Graveyard. When this card is sent to the Graveyardm inflict 1000 points of Direct Damage to this card's controller."

iii) Change to Fiend-Type

 

Poseidon:

i) Change name to "Poseidon, God of The Sea"

ii) "This card can only be Tribute Summoned while "Umi" is face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned successfully, send all WATER monsters on the field to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for every WATER monster sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect."

 

Thanatos:

i) Make it an Earth monster (as Thanatos was sometimes seen as an earth deity).

ii) Change to Fiend or Spellcaster-Type.

iii) "If you Tribute Summon this monster by Tributing 3 monsters on the field, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field." (Makes the effect stronger)

 

Destruction Wave:

i) "You can only activate this card when "Thantos..." is face-up on your side of the field. Pay 1000 (2000 LP is an awful lot) to destroy all monsters on the field except this card.

 

Descent of The Thunder God:

i) "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Zeus The God of Thunder". You must offer "Hades The God of Death" and "Poseidon God of The Sea" as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

 

Castle of The Netherworld:

i) "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all DARK monsters by 400 and decrease the ATK and DEF of LIGHT monsters by 300. Pay 500 Life Points to keep this card face-up during your Standby Phase."

 

 

My OCG is possibly slightly outdated, but that should take care of most of the errors. If you need suggestions for further cards, you need a card that restores your Life Points, as these cards will drain them very quickly.

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Look people who make greek god Yu-Gi-Oh cards....No need to make Zeus' date='Posiedon and Hades women. Cuz they're not. Nice pics,8/10

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actually.. they are just some men with long hair.... not women at all

and bro,

mayb u think that i was copying that guy who make the greek god card. but pls look at the date that i post. i think i post this first.:-(

 

besides, im a newbie.. of coz i have many things to learn

 

anyway, ur rating was appreciated:P

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