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Black Dragon Series


magicjohnson23

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"Dragon" type= Dragon-Type

 

may not= cannot

 

The Black Rock Dragon is a little OP'd. I believe the above are the OCG errors, I don't think there are more. A little too plain of an image, it's not fuzzy, but it's not that spiced up. I would try to avoid this image. A card that's supposed to be cool shouldn't have a pic like that. Other than that it's alright. 7/10 good go, for a new member :)

 

monster=Monster

 

That one is not OP'd. It has another plain image, but not fuzzy. The above should be the OCG errors. Other than that it is fine. Better job with this one 7.9/10 :)

 

 

All you need to do is remove the inflict or gain part on the Black Rock Dragon, some more creative images, and fix the minor OCG errors. Good job! 7.7/10

 

P.S. OCG around here means Official Card Grammar

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