hinata1312 Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 Don't know if anyones seen it yet really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YurkaThePure Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but I think they're pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted October 21, 2007 Report Share Posted October 21, 2007 Nana is broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metroid_Master Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 Diclonius? Well, the cards look good but the text could use some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata1312 Posted October 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 Thanks for the post. sorry about the text. Reading and writing problems, but hey i do my best. Diclonius is hard to explain. It's a good but stange show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata1312 Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 Here is somemore. I'll try to finish soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fear Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 What is a Broken card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fear Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 ???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata1312 Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 When i first posted them. Nana had only one star. forgot to increase the stars. sorry cannot contiune. the rest of the pics i have found are to graphic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.H. Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 I love 'em 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 You have Fake Types and you have a few Spelling and Grammer mistakes but they are pretty good 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardMaker3000 Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 only problem... Try and add effects! But what effects are there need abit of grammar correction. Apart from that and fake types. (I have some too..) 8/10. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenneko Kazeno Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Love the cards, sorry about the rest of your planed cards, try looking for alternates on Deviantart. A small fix with a couple of your effects, it should be "Diclonius-Type" instead of Diclonius type or "Diclonius" type. Other than that, read over the cards and you will find the small grammer or spelling mistakes. I think spoiler tags would help you out. these are done by [spoiler=Name of spoiler] the cards You can name a spoiler whatever and put spoilers inside spoilers. Well, after all that I give you 8/10 for the unique idea a nice shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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