glayag Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Hello Im new here i just want you to Rate my First cardWhite Dragon of Moon Please tell me what do you think1-Very Bad2-Bad3-Moderate4-Good5-Cool Thnx_________________________________________________________________________________________________________I Have updated it pls tell me Whats wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 You need to gather and organize your thoughts regarding effects. I got the idea but needs improvement. I won't comment your OCG cause it's natural for someone's first card to have bad OCG. My advice is for you to look at existing cards and get a lot of idea from it. Also take note on how the effects are worded:) Not bad for a first card. At least it's not a vanilla(Normal Monster)^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glayag Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Ok Thank you For your Advice i will do what you told me P.S. Tnx For your Word "Not Bad For first timer" I reaaaally Apreciate it tnxP.S.S This is the word i dont know what is OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 OCG - Official Card GrammarIt is how card effects are written. Go to my sig. There's an OCG thread there^_^Read through it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glayag Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Thank You now i understand but i can't seem to point out everything please help meThe only Thing i pointed out is Dragon/effect to Dragon-type/effect and Magic/Trap to Spell/Trap Please check me if i'm wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 pretty good for your 1st card. the pic is even nice. all i can see wrong is some words that might not need CAPS and magic=spell. the more you make cards and post them, the better your OCG will get. 7.5/10 for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glayag Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Thnx Fish eye AWESOME!!!! 3/4 ScoreO Yeah!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 dont worry..the effect is understandble..the pic is overused..the atk is to much..bring it down to 2500 or something..and for type dont put dragon-type..just put the specific type...dragon ,spellcaster ,fairy etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Decent for a first card. I would follow pitski's advice, since he is very knowledgable... I think I spelled that right lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glayag Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Yes I Did. i did follow Pitski and in his OCG Threadi know he is genius maybe in school he's the best in english ^^ P.S.Hawkeye Peirce pls tell me what do you mean with decentWell i think my score here 7.5/10 or 3.35/5 Estimation 4/5 It means It is GOODHOOOOOOORAYYY!!!!!!!!Thank You All Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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