KingYuan Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 This is my new set and also my first cards. The images are from Google searches, so I don't remember what sites exactly. They are supposed to be realistic, but I had to make up a new type [ Magi ]. Anyway, enjoy and comment please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 ocg errors...but nice pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 ocg errors...but nice pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingYuan Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Thanks guys.Could you tell me what I should change to fix them? All the 4☆ have similar effects, as do the 6☆. So you would only need to point out one of each, and I'll fix the rest.Also, do you think they would be too overpowered for a real deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 these are quite good. the only thing i can tell you is when you say "4 star", its gonna be "a level 4" pics are great. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baroque in Paradise Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 You ask, and I answer -- but as the Djinni say, 'be careful what you wish for.' Magi Higu: UNIQUE TYPING = UGH. Please make 'Magi' a Subtype if you must -- Spellcaster exists for a reason, and you already have it set as an Archetype. As for the OCG, here goes-- "When this card is Summoned, you may flip a coin. If the result is Heads, you may search your Deck for 1 "Magi" card and add it to your hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every other FIRE-Attribute or "Magi" card you control." I'm sure that the latter part of my OCG may need some correcting, but for now it shall suffice. Magi Irinia: Same complaint as Higu, make 'Magi' a Subtype (there's instructions on how to do it somewhere in the Tutorials section). Other than that, OCG fix time! "When this card is Summoned, you may Special Summon a Level 4 "Magi" monster *. This card gains 200 ATK for every other "Magi" card you control, and loses 100 ATK for every DARK-attribute or non-"Magi" card** on the field." *depending on from where you want it Summoned, you'll splice in "from your hand", "from your Deck", "from your Graveyard", "from your hand or Deck", "from your Deck or Graveyard", "from your hand or Graveyard", "from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard", or something completely different in where I put that '*'. ** please tell me you just mean 'Monster', otherwise this card is going to be severely weakened by Spell/Trap Cards. So, with that, I bid you adieu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
budy236 Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Nice pics,i think their pretty cool OCG errors 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 these are quite good. the only thing i can tell you is when you say "4 star"' date=' its gonna be "a level 4" pics are great. 8.5/10[/quote']Nice pic Magi Higu: UNIQUE TYPING = UGH. Please make 'Magi' a Subtype if you must -- Spellcaster exists for a reason' date=' and you already have it set as an Archetype. As for the OCG, here goes-- "When this card is Summoned, you may flip a coin. If the result is Heads, you may search your Deck for 1 "Magi" card and add it to your hand. This card gains 200 ATK for every other FIRE-Attribute or "Magi" card you control." I'm sure that the latter part of my OCG may need some correcting, but for now it shall suffice. Magi Irinia: Same complaint as Higu, make 'Magi' a Subtype (there's instructions on how to do it somewhere in the Tutorials section). Other than that, OCG fix time! "When this card is Summoned, you may Special Summon a Level 4 "Magi" monster *. This card gains 200 ATK for every other "Magi" card you control, and loses 100 ATK for every DARK-attribute or non-"Magi" card** on the field." *depending on from where you want it Summoned, you'll splice in "from your hand", "from your Deck", "from your Graveyard", "from your hand or Deck", "from your Deck or Graveyard", "from your hand or Graveyard", "from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard", or something completely different in where I put that '*'. ** please tell me you just mean 'Monster', otherwise this card is going to be severely weakened by Spell/Trap Cards. So, with that, I bid you adieu.[/quote']thanx baroque for not making me write that down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingYuan Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Thank you, I'll fix and repost right away (and yes, I did mean to say Non-Magi *monsters*)I didn't even realize that! EDIT: Ok, the old cards are fixed (and are now Spellcasters), and here are two new cards in the Magi Set...These shouldn't have any errors, but they are my first magic cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkZane007 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 the pics are very coolThis is one of the best setsrate 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingYuan Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Wow! Thanks a lot!New cards still coming... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Your first 4 monsters have the same effectsome have OCGYour spels nice just a few OCGGreat for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mech king Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Good pictures,OCG is good considering the fact your new,and they are realistic.I give you a 14/20 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingYuan Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Here are the fixed versions. Did I miss any errors?And I don't know why Irinia isn't showing up anymore in the first post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 ocg errors...but nice pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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