can one correct my OCG

[Wanderley]

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Don't forget your capitalizations..

Set

Defense Position

 

damage between attacking monster's ATK and that card's what?

[Neilsweaky]

This card can only be Set. When this card is an attack Target while it is in face-down Defense Position, increase your Life Points by the difference of the ATK of the attacking monster and the ATK of this card.

[OmegaWave]

[align=center]Obsidian Rating

 

(OCG Fix)

This card cannot be Summoned. When this card is attacked while face-down, increase your life points by an amount equal to the difference between the ATK of the attacking monster and the DEF of this card then flip this card into face-up Defense Position.

 

(Grading)

Picture - .5/2

OCG - 1/2

Usefulness - 1.5/2

Balance - 2/2

 

Total - 5/8

Grade - B-

 

(Review)

I've only seen effects like this on Ancient Lamp and Big Shield Guardna. Konami should've made more cards like this.

 

Your OCG wasn't all that bad. It was good enough to where atleast everyone knew what to do. It just wasn't worded correctly. Lucky for you, i'm the OCG teacher for the Duel Academy. If you have ANY OCG questions at all, send me a Private Message and i'll be happy to help out.

 

The picture is to bland. No background and the monster itself is blurry. Try for a better pic selection.

 

This card is balanced for 2 Reasons.

1. "This card cannot be Summoned."

2. Once it's face-up it's effect can't activate again unless you use Spell/Trap support.

 

Although.....maybe consider lowing the Defence just a little? Maybe to 2400 or 2500? Or even just increase the level to 6 or 7.

 

Overall, a nice try to revive an old outdated, albiet good Effect Method. I look forward to see moar from you. :)[/align]

[Ghost Ryder]

[align=center]Obsidian Rating

 

(OCG Fix)

This card cannot be Summoned. When this card is attacked while face-down' date=' increase your [b']L[/b]ife Points by an amount equal to the difference between the ATK of the attacking monster and the DEF of this card, then flip this card into face-up Defense Position.

 

(Grading)

Picture - .5/2

OCG - 1/2

Usefulness - 1.5/2

Balance - 2/2

 

Total - 5/8

Grade - B-

 

(Review)

I've only seen effects like this on Ancient Lamp and Big Shield Guardna. Konami should've made more cards like this.

 

Your OCG wasn't all that bad. It was good enough to where atleast everyone knew what to do. It just wasn't worded correctly. Lucky for you, i'm the OCG teacher for the Duel Academy. If you have ANY OCG questions at all, send me a Private Message and i'll be happy to help out.

 

The picture is to bland. No background and the monster itself is blurry. Try for a better pic selection.

 

This card is balanced for 2 Reasons.

1. "This card cannot be Summoned."

2. Once it's face-up it's effect can't activate again unless you use Spell/Trap support.

 

Although.....maybe consider lowing the Defence just a little? Maybe to 2400 or 2500? Or even just increase the level to 6 or 7.

 

Overall, a nice try to revive an old outdated, albiet good Effect Method. I look forward to see moar from you. :)[/align]

 

An I found OCG errors from you XD.

~ Fixed, anyways, the image is alright. Concept is good, 6.6/10.