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peo222

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this is season 1 of my Cyber Heros

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tell me what you think and i will put season 2,3,4 up

i had a lot more of season 1 but i just put up my first ones to see how you like them but i got better for season 2,3,4 so if i get 2 stars i will post the other 50 your so

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LiAM Newbie

LiAM

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wow terrible job!

They aren't even called cyber heroes

You didn't even try. You did a lame job

 

0/OVER 9000!

 

P.S. don't make anymore

 

Have you ever played the game?

 

Your OCG needs some serious changing.

 

The pictures need backgrounds.

 

And Lastly' date=' all of them are [b']Machine-Type[/b] Monsters. Don't make up types.

 

This.

 

Oh and n00b.

 

This forum is based on Yugioh cards - I suggest you get a bit of background info before using the Card Maker.

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Felix Newbie

Felix

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Don't double/tripple/quadrouple post. The cards are bad and you got the names wrong, they're from the Megaman Capcom series which means this also goes in Pop Culture, now get the flippy f'ck overyour self and listen to the people that know sh!t more about this site/card making than you do. You didn't even try to make them write.

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mr.tacos

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and what do you mean there not cyber heros

you all are like 5 years old im 16 f***ing years old b****

and what do you mean there not cyber heros

you all are like 5 years old im 16 f***ing years old b****

Yeah, a 16 year old drop out who doesn't know anything about megaman

 

 

Someone ban this "16 year old" >_>

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Baroque in Paradise

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AND NOW FOR SOMETHING CONSTRUCTIVE. Reviews.

 

Cyber Hero: Vanilla, something people don't like to see here. Also, you already have the archetype set so I don't think you need a made-up Type.

 

Cyber Hero K-9: MMC (MegaMan 'Classic') Rush. Why not use Popup virus, the MMBN (Megaman Battle Network) Rush? There ARE pictures of him. That said, it's better to use 'Beast' over 'Dog', and the proper OCG for the effect would be either "When this card is Summoned, add one "Cyber Hero" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.", "When this card is Summoned, Special Summon one "Cyber Hero" monster from your Graveyard.", "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, add one "Cyber Hero" monster from your Graveyard to your hand (except for this card).", or "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon one "Cyber Hero" monster from your Graveyard (except for this card)."

 

Cyber Hero Magnet: I laugh only because he's Model FX from MMZX (MegaMan ZX), is based off of Fighting Fafnir/Fefnir (Trope Sign: "Spell My Name With An 'S'"), and is a fire-based fighter that has (and is holding) two very large GUNS that he can PUNCH people with. Stylistic differences put aside, his effect should read similarly to K-9's, but instead of ". . . add one . . . " or ". . . Special Summon one . . . ", it should say "draw 2 cards.". Though I can't help but feel that his ATK/DEF are disproportionate to his draw effect, and if you're making him a magnet then 'Thunder' would be the type you'd be best using, seeing as not only does it have existing support but it also happens to have a Magnet in it already (Morphtronic Magnen).

 

Cyber Hero Knight: TYPE PLEASE. Also, love the watermark, means that came from a certain MEGAMAN FANSITE THAT I KNOW OF. Also, as for who he really is, the guy's Tengu Man from MMC, and one of the more annoying bosses right up there with the infamous Air Man (courtesy of this guy's tendency to fly around like a lunatic).

 

Cyber Hero Lightning: 'Thunder' exists as a type, just ask the Batterymen. Effect would ONCE AGAIN read like K-9 or Magnet's, but substitute "destroy one face-up Spell card your opponent controls." instead of the above twosome's respective effects.

 

Cyber Hero Ninja # 1: Once again, it would be appreciated if you would use an existing type, but if you insist on this so much then I can't stop you. As for his effect, you actually have near-perfect OCG -- "This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly if there is a face-down card on the field." -- though you might want to employ a nerf of some sort if you want it to be balanced (perhaps make it a specific TYPE of face-down, like a face-down Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field or, for a more famous example, a face-down Spell or Trap card on the field). As for the image, this is Phantom, short-lived member of the Shitennou of MMZ (Megaman Zero), a group which Fighting Fafnir was a member of (note that 'Shitennou' is basically 'four great generals', not a swear word -- Gratuitous Japanese FTW)

 

Cyber Hero Ninja # 2: I LAUGH. This time because SHE (that's Aile in that armor, by the by, rather than FX with Vent [both the same game's protagonist]) is from MMZX, and using Biometal Model PX (which, where FX comes from Fafnir, PX comes from PHANTOM, the guy you used for the OTHER Ninja's pic). This time, you just need to reiterate your Cyber Hero Ninja # 1's effect ("This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.")

 

Cyber Hero Sonic Boom: Bass, the anti-Megaman made by Dr. Wily (from Megaman's blueprints, no less), from MMC, is whom you've used for your image. As for the effect, AGAIN refer to my points on K-9, Magnet, and Lightning.

 

Cyber Pay Back: Please be more specific -- is it Battle Damage, Effect Damage, damage you take from a battle involving a Cyber Hero, damage you take while you CONTROL a Cyber Hero, what? Until you tell that, I can't give you an OCG fix on it.

 

Altogether: Please refer to yugioh.wikia.com for help in writing out your OCG (Official Card Grammar), but keep trying (and try to edit your images so that they don't get squashed like these; make sure they're equal length and width, or there'll be squashing as it gets resized by the Card Maker to fit).

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Agaming Newbie

Agaming

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yes i played the game and i could kick all your ass

so shut the f*** up

and what do you mean there not cyber heros

you all are like 5 years old im 16 f***ing years old b****

and what do you mean there not cyber heros

you all are like 5 years old im 16 f***ing years old b****

 

f*** u 2

i dont care were they go i will put them were i want

and i will post as many times i want

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b**** i dont know anting about megaman but the pics are cool and i go to job corps

 

sorry mate i'm so reporting you you've broken two rules

1) Swering

2) Spam

so don't do it again and also your cards have blury pictures, OCG errors and normal monsters sorry this is bad

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B3lly N3rd Newbie

B3lly N3rd

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wow terrible job!

They aren't even called cyber heroes

You didn't even try. You did a lame job

 

0/OVER 9000!

 

P.S. don't make anymore

 

 

f*** u 2

i dont care were they go i will put them were i want

and i will post as many times i want

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d ghdgfbhteyrgfr rd gasrgy h

htgshghtrhr ghrhhs gbgfbgf

 

dont double post..infact you more than double posted..hm....i should report..i guess..

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