B3lly N3rd Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Roses are Red,Violets are BlueYour Mother is Ugly and so are youYour Face is Red and your Butt is GreenDont take this the wrong way this isnt meanMy Gosh you are Ugly and thats no LieIf i look Directly in your eyes,i swear i will dieCant Look at you not even for a secondBut today i will teach you a lessionStop Being Ugly and Take a BathWater x Soap + Towel Do the Damn MathHere i am to the End of this PoemSo ill just say something that Rhymes..like Foam Waddya Think lol :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Water x Soap + Towel Do the Damn Math Too many syllables, 'cuz you have to say "water times soap plus towel." :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 enh i dont care much for the english language and its silly rules...tis why the other vowels hate "Y" so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferro Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 lol. It's good I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 the first poem ive ever written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Lolzrs i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 yay!!!..i might put it in poll section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Roses are Red' date='Violets are Blue[/quote'] I stopped reading right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 what!!why??????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Roses are Red' date='Violets are Blue[/quote'] I stopped reading right there.Same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 ^ same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 I'm impressed.You took retardation to a whole new level... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Lining Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Funny stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 what!!why??????????? Because that line alone tells me that this poem is unoriginal and boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 oh that's just plain insulting, I don't see how anyone would like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I'm impressed.You took retardation to a whole new level... thank you!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 everybody here is a bunch of fishpaste! its good!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 every1 is entitled to their opinions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 oh that's just plain insulting' date=' I don't see how anyone would like it.[/quote']I think that you are missing the point, since there are many forms of humor that are based on being insulting. I am surprised you have not yet encountered them. That being said, I did not find this poem particularly funny, and I found the motif to be overused. I suggest greater effort in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 why put effort in anything..it either comes out good or bad.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 NO rythym Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Santi :D Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I gave this to your mother as a present for mother's day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I gave this to your mother as a present for mother's day. thats funny..i gave it to yours for your mothers birthday..he was very thankfull.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 why put effort in anything..it either comes out good or bad.. Let's see you try that philosophy with High School and College and find out where that takes you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Good point. If you don't put effort into something, a time will come where it won't come out at all {pardon the wording}. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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