Flames of Time set

[Rinkotsu]

Hey all, this is Rin, back from the dead lol. I decided to start a set, not an awfully big one, as I would add a lot of existing cards to it. Right now, I'm going to upload the first five cards I made for this set. Critique them and tell me whatcha think. And to be honests, I would guess one or two of these monsters are just alternative for monsters that exist...but thats okay, they've already done so before -coughsstupidgolemscoughs-

 

 

Lore:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Iblis - Demon of Time". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand.

 

 

Lore: As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, monsters destroyed by this monster as a result of battle are removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. When this face-up card on the field is sent to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card.

 

 

Lore:This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with a monster with the same ATK. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return 1 monster on the field to its owner's hand.

 

 

Lore: Once per turn, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Tuner Monster from your Graveyard.

 

 

Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Water Monster from your Deck.

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Sorry bout that...>_< its been a while since I had to upload cards and imageshack isn't the most comprehensive thing to be using at 6 am with no sleep

[DuelingDude2]

Are these all in one set?

Water = WATER

Lore:This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with a monster with the same ATK. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, return 1 monster on the field to its owner's hand.

Instead becomes

Lore:This card is not destroyed as a result of battle with a monster that has the same ATK as it. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can return 1 monster on the field to it's owner's hand.

 

Great work on Iblis - Demon of Time, I can spot no OCG errors.

 

GRADE: B