moldfire Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 [align=center]Goldenfire PhoenixEffectThis card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Advanced Summoned except by Releasing 3 face up FIRE monsters you control. This monster's original ATK is equal to the combined Level Stars of the released monsters x 300. If this card would be destroyed by battle remove from play 2 monsters from your hand, field or graveyard to send it back to your hand. Ying Yang DragonsEffectWhen this card is activated you may special summon 1 dark level 4 dragon type monster and 1 light level 4 dragon type monster. On the turn that this card is activated the summond monsters attk and def are doubled. While this card is face up on the field neither of the summond monsters can be destroyed by battle (Damage calculation applied normaly). Moldfire DragonEffectThis monster can not be Special Summond. This monster can not be normal summond or set except by paying 1500 lifepoints. This monster can not be destroyed by battle and is not affected by magic or trap cards. At the during the second end phase after this card is summond remove this card from play and inflict damage to your opponents lifepoints worth half this monsters attk.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 the card setup is kinda bad. you cant have a divine-beast effect w/o the DIVINE attribute. And when you put a ? for the ATK or DEF it has to be only 1, not 3. Moldfire Dragon seems balanced enough. theres some OCG errors in it tho. ying yang seems alright i suppose. Phoenix is okay, its balanced enough. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moldfire Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Thanks, I will take the things you said in to consideration for improoving these and future cards as these are my 1st 3 custom cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 [align=center]The OCG is burning my eyes :( Second card:When this card is activated you may Special Summon 1 DARK level 4 Dragon-Type monster and 1 light Level 4 Dragon-Type monster. On the turn that this card is activated the Special Summoned monsters ATK and DEF are doubled. While this card is face up on the field neither of the summoned monsters can be destroyed by battle (Damage Calculation applied normaly). Third card:This monster cannot be Special Summoned. This monster can not be Normal Summoned or set except by paying 1500 Life Points. This monster can not be destroyed by battle and is not affected by Spell or Trap Cards. At the during the End Phase after this card is Normal Summoned remove this card from play and inflict damage to your opponents Life Points worth half this monsters ATK. That's only some of the OCG. You still need to put it in the right order.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 You say tribue summoned, don't say advance summoned (even though those who sub japanese episodes use it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 -Dronelol... i take it you believe in harsh critisisms to ppl get better? I still say the third card is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 lol... i take it you believe in harsh critisisms to ppl get better Drone? I still say the third card is good.[align=justify] Actually I was talking about the first card' date=' and what do you mean?[/align'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 lol... i take it you believe in harsh critisisms to ppl get better Drone? I still say the third card is good.[align=justify] Actually I was talking about the first card' date=' and what do you mean?[/align'] mm, misunderstanding. that remark was at DRONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 [align=center]Actually, the problem is that if I give him all the answers, he'll never learn from his mistakes :?. It also tends to waste my time. Meh, as they say: "Time that you enjoy wasting is not wasted time".[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moldfire Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Well i accept all criticism, because it will help me make better cards and stuff, I just need to learn my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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