Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I don't know if many of you have noticed, but i am bot the mentor/teacher of bobo144. And that inspired me to make this: V1. I don't know if its hard for you to see the blending but its that white-golden tint. Also, yes i know the lightings messed up, but thats the best I could get it. V2. I made it more lighter so it could look better and removed the effect because it looked bad. Took me 2 1/2 Hours to make it the best i could.CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 It's good, not very interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 The random text sucks.The render seems LQ.Random effects at the down left corner are bad.Got some flow.I think it doesn't blend =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 What does that text say?Is it just random words XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 The random text sucks.The render seems LQ.Random effects at the down left corner are bad.Got some flow.I think it doesn't blend =/ The render doesn't seem LQ. He probably blurred parts of it to make the face as the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 It's good' date=' not very interesting.[/quote'] Thanks. The random text sucks. Ok' date=' its supposed to be school notes.[/b']The render seems LQ. I had to make it smaller, so that might be it.Random effects at the down left corner are bad. It was worth a try ;DGot some flow. Yay!I think it doesn't blend =/ D: Edit: V2 UP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 some flow...this aint that good.you should never blur your renderthe notes make the sig a little too busy.did you know that things get better quality whne you make them smaller? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 some flow...this aint that good. Ok......you should never blur your render I didn't >.>the notes make the sig a little too busy. Noted ;Ddid you know that things get better quality whne you make them smaller? Orly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 some flow...this aint that good. Ok......you should never blur your render I didn't >.>the notes make the sig a little too busy. Noted ;Ddid you know that things get better quality whne you make them smaller? Orly?uhhuh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 some flow...this aint that good. Ok......you should never blur your render I didn't >.>the notes make the sig a little too busy. Noted ;Ddid you know that things get better quality whne you make them smaller? Orly?uhhuh Thanks, i'll remember that for my next sig, anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Now it's even more boring. Add some effects that contribute to flow.Take away the note-text, it's too much. It is actually okay to blur the render on the edges, so it contributes to the focal point. V2 is too bright, tone it down by half way between v2 and v1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Now it's even more boring. Add some effects that contribute to flow.Take away the note-text' date=' it's too much. It is actually okay to blur the render on the edges, so it contributes to the focal point. V2 is too bright, tone it down by half way between v2 and v1.[/quote'] Ok, thanks Careless Whisper :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 It took you 2 and half hours to make this? So it's from scratch? O.o? lol otherwise its just a render, a stock, and some text with lighting, take about 5-10 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Yes, from scratch ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 So the render is self drawn and the BG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 The BG Is, the render was rendered by me, but then i realised after i posted this there was already a render of it on PR O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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