Transformerfan2009 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I've decided to take a break from making Transformer cards and create some other ones. This idea came from some other card designers doing Kingdom Hearts. I've gone with the villains becasue they don't get any respect. The pics will look a little streched due to me cropping them but i'll deal with that and hopefully get some more cards up. This is my first Syncro Monster so if you can think of a better effect or a way to improve this one please inform me! Card Lore for Stealth Sneak: Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to "Clayton" OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When this card is Equipped in this manner, the monster can attack your opponent's life points directly.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) Card lore for Heartless Darkside: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can activate one of the folwing effects:• Destroy one Field Spell card on the field.• Special Summon one monster that has "Heartless" in its name or is named "Riku the fallen Keybearer."• Increase this monster's Attack power by 600 for each Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard. If there any spelling errors i made or if the background needs to be different, please inform me and i will correct it. If the description of the Solider is wrong please, please please tell me what it should be and i will use it with the writer's permission of course. The next few cards won't have backgrounds because i don't have access to Photoshop anymore.Sorry :( i would like to say a Happy Brithday to TDI Owen and to say thanks for checking out my cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 the pic is a little stretched. also you need to say what the shadow token's stats are.(level/type/attribute/atk/def) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Find a better pic. Next, follow fish-eye's advice about the token. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Okay, thanks for the point outs and i apologize for the way the pic looks. I guessed when i cropped it it became all streched. i'll fix the effects and possibly the pic when i get the time to access Photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizuku Kagirinai Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Not too bad. The image is slightly squashed, and the effect needs work. Otherwise, it is good. 7/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 It's your first card. I'll give you a review when you post ALL the Heartless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Okay, I know that the pic looks a little squashed so i'm going to redo the Shadow card as well as some others that look weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I said ALL The Heartless. This includes Darkside, Red Nocturne, Guard Armor, Opposite Armor, Blue Rhapsody, Yellow Opera, Green Requiem, Power and Bouncywild, Large Body, Normal and Fat Bandit, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 TDI Owen, i know what you meant. but it will take me a while to find all the Heartless pictures and create backgrounds for them. you'll just have to make due with what i post all right? I'm also going to include some of the Heartless villians (that's spelled wrong) such as Oogie Boogie, Hook, Malifeacant (Spelled wrong again!) etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Vanilla Meh..7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Okay, what the heck are vanillas? Sorry if i sound ingorant people but i'm just curious becasue a lot of people keep saying it to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marblecurrent Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Nice Effect!! 7/10 for me:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Okay' date=' what the heck are vanillas? Sorry if i sound ingorant people but i'm just curious becasue a lot of people keep saying it to me.[/quote'] vanillas are normal monsters. most members don't like "normals" unless they have cards to support them. so plz add an effect to your normal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lampy Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 People don't like normals because they show no effort in my book.Unless you take the time to give them support... then thats o.k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Here: http://kingdomhearts.wikia.com/wiki/Heartless Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Alright, people thanks for the suggestions. I made a few Field spells for the normal monsters. TDI Owen, thanks for the link. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Alright' date=' people thanks for the suggestions. I made a few Field spells for the normal monsters. TDI Owen, thanks for the link.[/quote'] You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 There was a KH Heartless thread here a while back, if I'm not mistaken. You should look it up for help. Not bad for a newbie though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airon Neil Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Posted by Lampy - Yesterday 08:39 PM People don't like normals because they show no effort in my book. Unless you take the time to give them support... then thats o.k. Well actually, There's still the description they have too write, true, effects can be very hard to come up with, but descriptions can be to (Unless you're lazy and just do the first thing that comes to your mind). As for the subject at hand, I think that the ideal is okay, but the soldier's background is just boring as heck, as well as the other backgrounds, but don't worry too much, I work on un-squishing the shadow card before you work on a background. You know what I like to do when I do a background? I find a picture that has a lot of colors and I copy a small part of that picture and paste it onto the card I'm making. Smooth it out a bit so it isn't obvious and you got a cool background. I rate them: 5.9/10 (work on those backgrounds and un-squish the shadow). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lampy Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 new card seems kinda simple for the long wait... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Indeed. So when it comes to Red, Blue, Yellow and Green will you make Red Fire, Blue Water, Yellow and Green Light or wil they all be Dark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lampy Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Red, blue and yellow?! you mean like Red Nocturne and Green Requiem and stuff like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 No, i'm going to make the Heartless magians (that's what i call them and the word is spelled wrong, i am seriously making my English teachers embarrassed.) based on the type of spells they throw.Example: Red Nocture is a fire spell casting Heartless so i will make it a fire attrbute and a pyro type monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 No' date=' i'm going to make the Heartless magians (that's what i call them and the word is spelled wrong, i am seriously making my English teachers embarrassed.) based on the type of spells they throw.Example: Red Nocture is a fire spell casting Heartless so i will make it a fire attrbute and a pyro type monster.[/quote'] Cool. You can give it the ability that it can also be treated as a Dark ATTribute, Spellcaster type monster. Blue Rhapsody can be a Water Aqua, Yellow Opera a Light Thunder, and Green Requiem a Light Spellcaster. Green Requiem can also restore your Life Points during each Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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